Maps

This map has grown lines,
deep creases, curled corners,  
since you've been gone.
Tear-stains and fingerprints
mar its wrinkled pages like scars,
mocking markers 
of where you've gone.

Mum's face has grown lines
around her mouth and eyes
since you've been gone.
And each sunrise tallies the days, 
fading the map's mosaic of colours 
as time fades the memory 
of your silly smile.

This map is a liar:
It tells me you're nearby,
only a page-length away.
But an entire world separates us.
Cities and countries and continents.
Rivers and lakes and oceans.
Land and sea 
have taken you from me.
And I want you back.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 2:14 PM
CONGRATS!!! love ~SKAT~
A   Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 9:44 AM
Heather, Congratulations on your sweet awesome free verse win.... you poem rocks... :-) Linda
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 4:05 AM
Congratulations on your win Heather xx
Anglesey Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 9:46 AM
Heather, this is finely crafted with the usual quality of design as though you paint the words with an artists brush
Eastman Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 9:39 AM
Sad... My father loves maps and is always planning the next trip... He doesn't understand why I stay home... It's because every thing I want is here... He keeps traveling....
Jordan Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 10:22 PM
I've always loved maps. Not only are they often beautiful in themselves, they talk about meaningful places, memories, plans... Very nice writing. Jack
Zerbst Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 10:21 AM
Awesome job of penning emotion. The tangible elements of grief make it a far better poem in my opinion, than one that only talks about grief and one person's woes. An artful showing of the facts here actually adds interest to the subjects' plight.
Bell Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 8:49 AM
truly nice keep up the nice work.
Hunter Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 6:33 AM
my...this is soaked with deep emotion. It's great, Heather...and so unique an idea with the map. By the way, you said you couldn't wait to read the next ridiculous poem. Well, it's up, and it's gross...haha
O'Leary Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 4:12 AM
Very nice... Terry
Dietrich Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 10:48 PM
wow, Heather!!! I will have to fave you back. You put up a stunner with this one!!!
Ninja Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 6:12 PM
I like the meaning of the map Heather... it does trick us so close places seem yet hours away they really are, enjoyed this one
Jones Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 6:01 PM
Very lovely Heather..its how I feel every time one of my three brothers were deployed somewhere...I know you are writing about something else but its the same feeling. Loved it..
Lamoureux Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 2:18 PM
I love how you look at things, another treasure in map form.
Manassian Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 11:42 AM
I agree with Ruben...this is so heart rending! My dear....I'm going to fav it as well and give it a glorious 7...Heather...the map leads to your heart. Forget the distance...you can keep him in your heart...and make your own memories of missed events. Hugs
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