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Maple Memories -Win

My balcony covered by a huge sycamore tree,
My constant companion of snowy Maple days,
Memories come as insects around flowering tree
Turning my gloomy days into glorious days.

The first candid approach in medicine to initiate,
Hippocrates sat under sycamore tree to explain,
As Budhha sat under the Bodhi tree to meditate,
Nirvana or the enlightenment of mind to attain.

Father Cavanaugh called it ‘The vengeance tree’,
Othello’s Desdemona sat sighing by a sycamore,
Flying to Egypt Virgin Mary rested under the tree,
Known as crann ban “money tree” in Iris folklore.

To demystify health care & known to personalize,
To me sycamore exists to socialize and to poetize.

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Ninth Place win in Chris's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Puddifoot Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 8:57 AM
congratulations on your win in chris's contest, this sonnet paints a vividly historic and beautiful picture of the trees...
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 5:36 PM
Really nice job Dr. Ram-Congrats. on your win :)
Brown Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 11:33 AM
Congratulations on your win in Chris's contest Dr. Ram. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 9:20 AM
Oh, yes, I remember this well. Great work, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your win in Chris's contest! Love, Carolyn
K. Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 9:14 AM
I remember reading this from before, Dr. Ram! Amazing tree indeed... Happy to read it again and Super congrats on your win :D
Deane Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 7:38 AM
Congrats on your win in the 2nd chance contest, beautifully writen
Taylor Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 7:20 AM
Congrats on your win, Dr Ram. Outstanding piece. Kudos. Kudos. Ralph
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 10:09 PM
WAY to GO, Dr. RAm, with a great poem on this sycamore tree. Congratulations.
Sweetheart Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 9:23 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on another great win in 2nd chance contest with this stunning piece my friend.. u never cease to amaze me luv..enjoy..
George   Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 5:58 AM
When great minds gather beneath a sycamore tree, dreams bcome reality - such is its power. Thank you for sharing this beautiful and enlightening sonnet. Lainie
Horsman Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 1:02 AM
you sure have helped me to enlighten my mind harry
Sweetheart Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 7:32 PM
Just wanted to say thankxx Dr. Ram for dedicating your Adam's Garden entry to me.. appreciate your thoughtfulness to the sponsor.. it will be judged soon as I have some personal issues to take care of this coming week... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Belt Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 6:59 PM
Great Sonnet Dr. Ram.....Thanks for your many comments.....Larry
Jordan Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 6:47 PM
Dr. Ram, very interesting and well written poem, God Bless, mj
Essam Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 1:17 PM
nice poem:)
Austin Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 9:09 AM
The sycamore in full leaf here, Dr. Ram. May the happy Buddha smile on you today and always. Love, daver
Devonshire Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 7:54 AM
Very thought-provoking write that stimulates the reader's thoughts on health care reform. Also liked the use of the trees to convey your message, Dr. Ram. Well done! Love, Carolyn
Spence Sr Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 7:08 AM
This is an excellent sonnet. I like the flow of the words and the message. The rhyming pattern also moves the poem along. Great job and keep writing. Joseph
Stella Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 6:48 AM
I call these trees a book of knowledge for you learn from everyone else great write my friend with outstanding imagery also thanks for your kind comments on my poems today keep up the wonderful writing and have a safe memorial day weekend
Falotico Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 6:28 AM
Very good my friend, wonderful flow and meaning....
K. Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 6:05 AM
Wonderful insights for these trees, Dr. Ram :) I would definitely have to agree with your last line! Really enjoyed reading this :) Thanks for sharing :)
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 3:38 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned....Next to last line and last line .....I wonder about this new health care...I problems on vacation...I had an internal stye on my eye and had to find an eye doctor...Found one they would not take my insurance or Medicare....I had to see a dr. so I paid...Grandson got an ear infection had to see a doctor they would not take any insurance or Medicare we had to pay...What is happening here?Sara
Hales Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 1:00 AM
hi ...this makes me want to sit under the Maple Tree ,,,,likes gloomy into glorious days ...and enlightenment of mind ..very nice .. thanks for my remarks on my poetry also sarah x have a good day
Harrison Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 10:45 PM
So beautiful Dr. , I love the majestic Maple Tree!
Iyer Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 10:36 PM
Nice Poem. Wish I could write such creative lines
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