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Maple Leaves

Maple leaves bright red Fall breezes remove loose stems 'Pon the ground now rest Like red leather gloves fit hand Leaves conform to earth's surface
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 10/15/2012 1:53:00 PM
I love the Red Maple and Red Leather gloves. :-) Great.
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Date: 10/13/2012 1:07:00 AM
Great imagery, Sara.
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Date: 10/11/2012 6:39:00 PM
Very nice. I love the 'Pon in lieu of Upon. Well written
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Date: 10/11/2012 5:44:00 PM
You are getting very good with these Tankas! They are a lot of fun aren't they...addicting I have to admit! I went through a Tanka phase where that's all I wrote, you probably remember that! But it was so much fun, as I'm sure you are noticing yourself how much fun it is! You are doing very well with these! I am enjoying reading them my friend! Keep them up, they are wondrous! Great Work!!
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Date: 10/11/2012 5:23:00 PM
I love the images of red, in the leaves and the gloves, very autumnal.
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