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Print Maple Leaves Poster Botanical Painting, Tree Leaf Canada USA ...

Maple

Mixed warm, cool days moisture
Maple leaves transform from
Midsummer's green to red
Make fall's crown, or golden
Maidenhead "Goldie Locks" 
Magnificent leaves twirl
Magnify gold on the lawn

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Howard Kerr

May 5, 2025 at 7:58 AM

Sara, I’m grateful as always for your reflections on my work Intrude included. A riot of beauteous colour and lyrical craft infuses this Pleiades Piece. Immaculate Howard

Regina Elliott

October 27, 2024 at 5:04 AM

So beauteous, Sara. My daughter's old high school has a huge red maple at the entryway. It's fiery red in spring and summer. Love this poem, a FAv. Sunday blessings :)

Sara Kendrick

October 27, 2024 at 4:24 PM

Yes, Regina, maples can be a big show in the fall and the Japanese Maple has such lovely color all summer. Thank you for the visit and for the honor of faving my work. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

October 18, 2024 at 1:24 PM

Interesting lines! Enjoyed!

Sara Kendrick

October 18, 2024 at 1:56 PM

Why, thank you Kim. I am still working on them to see what I can do. I need a more inspiring day to work. Sara K

Sam Kauffman

October 18, 2024 at 11:42 AM

Delightful, Sara especially in light of the artwork! I loved seeing all of the different maple leaves. Wonderful, creative phrases! I'm so glad you tried the form. It's so wonderful I would love to see you enter it as it has all the elements of a beautiful entry. Just an FYI - in a Pleiades for "maples," each line begins with a word starting with the letter "M." I hope you don't mind my feedback as I love this poem. Best wishes and blessings!

Sara Kendrick

October 18, 2024 at 1:10 PM

Thank you, Sam. I missed one detail when I was reading at 3:30 this morning about how to write them. I think I have written them before but did not remember how it was done. Sara K..I could say poetic license...

Valsa George

October 18, 2024 at 5:34 AM

"golden locks like Goldie Locks" I liked it very much. A lovely verse on maple leaves and autumn ! This you have to re write into Pleiades form if you wish to enter the contest.

Sara Kendrick

October 18, 2024 at 12:49 PM

Why, thank you, Valsa. I haven't decided what to enter yet. I am writing to see where my thoughts will lead me. Some interesting facts I learned about maple trees. Sara K

Ink Empress

October 18, 2024 at 2:52 AM

Wow this is absolutely stunning! You did an amazing job dear sara! I think andrea will love the way youv written yours! Best wishes! Sending you light always

Sara Kendrick

October 18, 2024 at 3:03 AM

IE, I haven't entered it yet. I was just trying to write one even though I thought I had written some before. Anyway, I will think about it and see if I want to write another one. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

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