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Many Years Ago Story Poem

Many years ago, a simple kiss made her glow. Love was everywhere, sweet flowers filled the air. That day there was no snow, the warm sand covered a toe. Her blue eyes and blond hair, with that yellow dress she wore with flare. July 4th was a big show, they said I do with a playing banjo. A beautiful white dress she did wear, a heavenly day brought him a tear.

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Valsa George

Date: 7/25/2023 9:19:00 PM

A beautiful poem of nostalgic remembrance. Congratulations Paula on your great win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/28/2023 4:11:00 PM

Thanks for your reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my nostalgic/romantic/fun write. A true story. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Terry Flood

Date: 7/25/2023 3:57:00 PM

I heard a rumour that you made up the banjo bit… I wanna know… who gets married without a banjo. I saw a documentary called ‘Deliverence’ and there were banjos all over the place. ;-) Enjoyed your romantic win, Paula. Terry

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/28/2023 4:09:00 PM

Thanks for your reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my romantic/fun short true story. I cannot tell a lie. Yes, I made up the banjo bit. I needed a word so banjo won out. We really had records. Remember them??? Have a blessed day writing away.................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/25/2023 8:02:00 AM

"4 Place" ~ Many Years Ago Story Poem ~ Date Written:7/4/2023

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/25/2023 1:38:00 AM

A nice short story, Paula, congratulations:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/25/2023 8:06:00 AM

Thanks for your reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my short story. It is true but no banjo. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Kelly Deschler

Date: 7/10/2023 4:22:00 PM

A lovely, romantic story, Paula ... Nicely done... My best wishes for the contest!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/12/2023 10:54:00 AM

Thanks for your reading/writing and for your best wishes. Glad you like my romantic write/story. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/4/2023 8:13:00 PM

Short and sweet, Paula!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/5/2023 9:38:00 AM

Thanks for your reading/writing. Glad you like my short/sweet~write/story. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/4/2023 7:39:00 PM

Sounds like a wedding in Paradise, Paula! Keep smiling and Happy Fourth! ~ Gershon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/5/2023 9:37:00 AM

Thanks for your reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my write/story. Yes, keep smiling. Have a blessed day writing away..................

Bill Baker

Date: 7/4/2023 4:58:00 PM

Happy Anniversary! A Love story on a beach ... their wedding day. Nice enjoyable read, Paula. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my friend. Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/5/2023 9:35:00 AM

Thanks for your reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my anniversary write. It started on the beach but we were not married on the beach. The weather was too hot. Have a blessed day writing away..................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/4/2023 1:39:00 PM

Many Years Ago Story Poem ~ Date Written:7/4/2023~~July 4th is our Anniversary.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/5/2023 9:28:00 AM

Thanks for your reading/writing. Glad you like my anniversary write. Have a blessed day writing away..................

Nancy Kaufman
Date: 7/4/2023 3:56:00 PM

Happy Anniversary dear Paula. I hope those sparks are still going off. Fondly, Nancy