Manto Blame

In the beginning, when man became-
Murder and death seemed a fun game.
This was not what God meant
When giving us consent-
To our own choice, only man is to blame.

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Jack Clark

Date: 5/18/2014 8:56:00 AM

Ah! I enjoyed this. Very introspective of man, Amy ... and ... Congratulations on your win! Jack C

David Williams

Date: 6/13/2012 7:17:00 AM

Amy, congrats on your win..David

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/12/2012 8:51:00 PM

How true. Congrats on your win, Amy! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/12/2012 7:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Any old or new Limerick" contest Amy. Love, Carol

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 6/12/2012 7:29:00 AM

Nice one Amy...Congrats on your win!

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/11/2012 7:30:00 PM

Congrats, Amy. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 6/11/2012 5:20:00 PM

Wonderful piece,Amy..Food for thought poetry...Good job,well done...Congratulations on your superb win...

Skat A

Date: 6/11/2012 3:55:00 PM

Thank you*luv~Skat

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2012 12:51:00 PM

AMY, , CONGRATS WITH YOUR AWESOME LIMERICK IN SKAT'S CONTEST,,, XOX~PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2010 8:43:00 PM

Congratulations AMy on your fine win. Luv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/25/2010 11:25:00 AM

Congratulations Amy on your win in John Freeman's contest "Human Foible vs Godly Nature". Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/25/2010 5:44:00 AM

Congrats, Amy. Great write. You and yours have a great weekend. xxxRalph

John Freeman

Date: 6/24/2010 11:06:00 PM

No! It was not what God meant with the consent he gave humanity. He didn't mean for our minds to make a covenant with death, and then try to acheive it. But he gave us the power to live life, not death. Congratulations, Amy on a fine presentation, and your support for the contest, Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2010 2:07:00 PM

good one, Amy, I hope it does well. And no, I was not traumatized by my earliest childhood memory. I think i must have kind of liked it. Otherwise, I would not be so crazy for Stephen King movies today. haha! Luv, Andrea