Mantis Religiosa!

Beautiful Mantis,

     Sitting on your leaf so proud,

          Praying for insects!



~For the Praying Mantis Haiku Contest~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 10:52 AM
Congratulations Tirzah on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Praying Mantis Haiku's". Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 1:06 PM
this one sure deserved a win. Congratulations, Tirzha. Luv, Andrea
Freeman Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 12:16 PM
Tizah, congratulations. Yea, praying before dinner. Smile. congratulations on your worthy poem's place in Carolyn's contest. Agape, Moses
Johnson Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 9:43 PM
Hndsome is as hndsome does.Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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July 8, 2010 at 9:18 PM
Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest. Keep that pen flowing. Karen
Sweetheart Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 8:32 PM
Congrats Tirzah on your winning poem in the Mantis contest.. way to go.. enjoy.. with luv..
Devonshire Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 8:30 PM
That's probably just what they pray for, Tirzah. Great poem! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Mason Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 4:02 PM
Great use of the word "praying/preying" and a perfect 5-7-5 form !! Good luck in the contest Tirzah and keep up the wonderful writing !!
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July 7, 2010 at 11:29 AM
I think you captured the essence of this preditor quite nicely here. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
Spence Sr Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 10:40 AM
This is just excellent. I can see the imagery of the Mantis awaiting a meal. It’s so interesting how life on Mother Earth survives. Great job! Joseph
Brown Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 4:19 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Tirzah. I wish you the best always. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 9:21 PM
Awesome thought to pen, Tirzah. check soupmail, Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 8:53 PM
OH< ME LIKES THIS ONE!!!! (I was thinking of using that name too, religiosa, it was so neat!) LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 6:29 PM
Really good Tirzah.. good luck in the quickie contest... my entry is The Prophet.. researched it really quick... before entering.. I posted a new blog with some vacation photos.. from Hawaii and a few from the seashore in Jersey our first trip.. we have hundreds.. hope u enjoy a llittle island magic tonight.. AlohA... "Sweetheart"
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July 6, 2010 at 3:35 PM
Nice one...I think they are so beautiful and interesting. BG
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