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Man's House

There’s backyard soccer clashes and test cricket matches, a shrine to footy with posters on the wall. Dirty dishes piled up high, washing, ironing ruffled lie … a man's house with a lady's photo in the hall. There are so many memories in this man's house. These memories will never cease to end, for in amongst these memories in this man's house, is the memory of a mother, lover, and a friend. Picking through the gentle parts; mending two broken hearts, and all within the year she has been gone. There's sadness from her leaving, though amongst their grieving, she left one simple message - ‘please be strong.’ From silence felt within he has to keep on going, raising his boy as both a dad and mum. They're for each other now, but troubles still arise somehow, at times forgotten what their partnership become. The boy with time now grows and copes the way he knows, finding solitude and strength in life. And dad can hope to find that hurt will heal in time, with love and strength off his departed wife. There's so many memories in this man's house. And these memories will never cease to end, for in amongst the memories in this man's house, is the memory of a mother, lover, and a friend.

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Date: 7/27/2019 2:34:00 AM
Longing and memories are evident in this write Lindsay - writing about real incidents in life is what a true poet does - our English teacher always told us, in any exam where you have to write an essay, always write about a true incident in your live, it will be easier to write and easy on the eye on the reader. Awesome poem Lindsay, Hugs, Jennifer.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/1/2019 12:01:00 AM
Well picked Jennifer … this is a true story and your teacher is right. It is way easier to go step by step and barely have to think. Thank you once again Jennifer - Lindsay
Date: 7/26/2019 4:27:00 PM
To a beautiful writer, Lindsay, You really ARE a fantastic poet. Want you to know, I appreciate your writing. I can tell all you put into poem Panagiota. xx
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 7/31/2019 11:59:00 PM
Hello Panagiota … when I read your comment I felt a lump come to my throat. It is so inspirational for me that you should think this way. I have no answer on how I write, just a few simple rules I follow. There are many inspiration poets on this site I have found - thank you Panagiota - Lindsay
Date: 7/24/2019 7:41:00 PM
So nostalgic. So poignant. 'Vintage Lindsay Laurie,' if I may say so. Two thumbs way up, my friend. Best wishes, Gershon
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 7/31/2019 11:54:00 PM
Hello Gershon … thank you once again Gershon. I think we might all know a family going through heartache and struggle at some time through life - Lindsay
Date: 7/24/2019 6:29:00 PM
You are too sensitive to be an Estate Sales Agent! Aloha! Rico
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 7/31/2019 11:51:00 PM
G'day Rico … I am a bit in this area Rico. I would probably be the first Real Estate Agent to go broke - thanks again Rico - Lindsay
Date: 7/24/2019 5:23:00 PM
There is pain within your brilliantly written lines tempered by hope Lindsay, in this poignant piece. I hope you entered it in a contest? This is a poetry gift! Aloha, Connie xxoo : )
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 7/31/2019 11:49:00 PM
Hello Connie … Life can throw up many challenges Connie, and for those left behind life must go on. I have rarely entered competitions Connie and for no apparent reason - thank you so much again Connie - Lindsay
Date: 7/24/2019 3:44:00 PM
Lindsay, this wonderful write sounds like it was written by a famous American poet (and my favorite poet) Edgar Guest. Pull up some of his poems and you will see why. What I like about him is that he writes about ordinary folks and things. Keep on writin', old Mate. Bob H
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 7/31/2019 11:45:00 PM
G'day Robert … I have him up and ready to read his poetry. That is where I get my enjoyment to Bob and a lot of my inspiration too. Struggle Street is so rich in stories - thank you Bob - Lindsay
Date: 7/24/2019 8:25:00 AM
The heart of a close family is in the home, memories live on forever.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 7/31/2019 11:41:00 PM
Hello Tom … ever so true Tom. A loving home will always be reminisced - thanks Mate - Lindsay

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