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Mankind's Rainbow

Light pierces the clouds
Solace found on dreary days
Living and sharing
As our Creator intends
Pure love, unconditional

All men are equal
Only perception differs
Listen to your heart
Find joy in diversity
Revel in mankind’s rainbow

Copyright © Carolyn Devonshire | Year Posted 2011

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Zzzzz Zzzzz Date: 8/3/2011 11:40:00 AM Good thoughts, poetically expressed. A deserving winner! xoxo Robert. Login to Reply

Sidney Hall Mad Poet Date: 7/29/2011 7:52:00 PM Congratulations and jubilation, Carolyn with this beautiful poem that deserves to look down on all of us below :-) Login to Reply

Lee Ramage Date: 7/29/2011 4:27:00 PM Beautiful poem. Thank you for penning such kind thoughts. Lee Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/28/2011 4:23:00 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 7/28/2011 3:44:00 PM So true the above words Carolyn....congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Sidney Beck Date: 7/28/2011 3:26:00 PM congratulations on a well deserved win Carolyn....I particularly like "revel in mankind's rainbow"....the different races and beliefs etc...an excellent image.....balanced with the first lines and the light piercng the dreary clouds.....very very clever arrangement....nicely done.......all my best wishes as always Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 7/28/2011 3:26:00 PM Oh LNC..another feather in your artistic cap..hope to have my phone this weekend..will call..congrats. BG Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 7/28/2011 7:32:00 AM Congratulations on your awesome win Carolyn :) lfde Wilma Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 7/27/2011 8:08:00 PM Yeah! Carolyn! congrad's on your win glad to be here with you! Light & Love Login to Reply

Jun-Jun Villanueva Date: 7/27/2011 3:35:00 PM congratulations....a well-deserved win...~~~~smile~~~~*_* junjun Login to Reply

Chiquitachiamaka Baity Date: 7/27/2011 2:27:00 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win with this beautiful entry!!!!!!! Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 7/27/2011 2:16:00 PM Beautiful. Many congrats on all your wins, Carolyn : ) I'll try to post a few poems tonight Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/27/2011 2:16:00 PM Congratulations on your win in Mose's "Best Shot" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Sidney Beck Date: 7/27/2011 1:40:00 PM very very nice...well done Carolyn Login to Reply

Emma Mantle Date: 7/27/2011 1:37:00 PM Congrats on a great win, best wishes Em :) Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 7/27/2011 12:29:00 PM hey carolyn , congrats on your great win, David Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/27/2011 12:22:00 PM topping the charts, yes, yes carols..fireworks of CHEERS to you for the great win..:) huggs! Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/27/2011 11:52:00 AM My congratulations on the first place win in the contest of John, Carolyn Login to Reply

Bob Quigley Date: 7/27/2011 11:28:00 AM Excellent Carolyn. You definitely gave it your best shot. Congrats on the win. Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 7/27/2011 11:26:00 AM Carolyn, The sponsor receives the grace. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 7/25/2011 11:54:00 AM That last line sure leaves such a lasting impression, Carolyn! I hope all is well with you :) and yup haha this Soup addiction sure is hard to get out of ;) hugs Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 7/23/2011 3:04:00 PM Yes, indeed. Lovely inspiring piece, my friend. I'll be back tomorrow to read some more of your poems. Thanks - your contest was a lot of fun : ) Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 7/23/2011 3:02:00 PM wonderful poetry and insight that is sometimes hard to live by moi .... but hopefully practice makes perfect..? John will love this one. I keep wanting to enter another contest but life gets in the way. I;ll get there. ..Oh yeah, I want to thank you for your chiropractics comment that got me off my duff and inspired me to finish a poem started a while ago and forgotten. Ode to my Chiro. Thanks Carolyn. Have a great one Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 7/23/2011 11:01:00 AM Lots to meditate on in this one. I like the title and the implication. Love, daver Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/22/2011 12:41:00 PM JOhn is going to love this, Carolyn. sometimes I am not quite sure what john wants in some of his contests. CAn we enter an old one about God in his contest? Very nicely done. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

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