Notes About The Poem

I felt at one time that this poem was too angry to ever publish; a dear friend of mine, Geoff Lindley, an artist with whom I have shown art, who also happened to be in a metal band, loved it. He, the lead singer/song writer for "The Uncooperatives" turned it into a song and it became a fan favorite. (I personally don't dig metal, nor do I recognize my own lyrics when he sings it, save the chorus "MANKIND MANKIND" but I am elated none the less). Enjoy!

Mankind

Has any other species
been so keen
to perfect an aptitude
to destroy itself?
Somehow I think not,
for nature's way
appears to sway
towards self preservation.
In a world
where only the strong
survive,
the strength
of the independent mind
bears the burden
of all mankind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Watt Avatar
July 10, 2020 at 6:16 PM
I came here after reading Edward's blog. Thanks for the tip! Twain said, "Man is the only animal that blushes. Or needs to." I value your independent mind, Pidge. Keep it up. ~ John
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 11, 2020 at 12:26 PM
Thank you for checking it out. I like that quote! I have so much I want to say to thank you but my usual brevity escapes me, honoured and humbled, xomo
Cresswell Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 2:01 PM
Wise woman I concur with your ideas.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 7:43 AM
;) xomo!
Sheehan Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 1:15 PM
Nice write. Enjoyed it immensely. It rings of truth.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 2:13 PM
Sweet, thank you Frank! :)
Merryman Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 5:36 PM
Well written, Maureen! Makes you think. Blessings, Kim
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 7:19 PM
Thank you Kim! Happy spring blessings to you xomo!
Hauser  Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 7:42 AM
Wonderful write but you can keep the heavy metal!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 8:00 AM
;) yeah...not my thang xomo
Vaso Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 10:01 PM
I really liked this! Mankind after all is a very complex word, its made up of 2 words, one being Mank and the other Ind, I still haven't figured it all out!!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 10:19 PM
Actually, "Mank Ind" would be a great name for a hard core poetry band!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 10:05 PM
Lol! ;)
Ball Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 9:12 PM
Oh I do so agree Maureen. We are so very self destructive and we are trying to take the entire world with us. So many times I have said that Mankind in an effort to improve our way of life has taken so much from nature and not given anything back that we are about to "improve" ourselves into extinction. A great write my friend. From 1 to 7 this is a 10. God Bless, JB
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 10:14 PM
Indeed, the only species that so completely adapts its environment instead of adapting to it. Our success is our greatest failure, our vision, our blindness. And as you touched on, cultures which embrace the natural ways have been squashed in the name of "progress". sigh.
Smith Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 8:21 PM
There is a lot of truth in your write...too many are worried about being number one they lose sight of the reasons to live.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 10:15 PM
Amen.
Coreggia Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 7:56 PM
Unfortunately, our aptitude to destroy goes beyond ourselves . . . we, weak and strong, bear the burden of all living creatures. Amitiés
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 7:57 PM
I could not agree more. Sadly.
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