Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Senryu

Notes About The Poem

- Manipulative Friendship -

your sense of humor

    the darkness drifts through your eyes -

                                       never with a lie








06.10. 2022
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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SENRYU Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: John lawless

1st place in the contest

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Weston Gregory November 15, 2022 at 5:40 PM Thoughtful with a sense of obscurity yet revealing double edgedness of human nature. I think mirth do. This piece is really provocative. Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2022 at 2:26 AM - Thank you for your comment, Gregory :) - hugs

Suzanne Delaney October 30, 2022 at 12:43 PM Brilliant Senryu, Anne-Lise: Congrats on your 1st place win. Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2022 at 2:26 AM - Thank you, SuZ :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin October 16, 2022 at 8:35 AM Anne-Lise, congratulations on your first place win! Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2022 at 2:25 AM - Thank you, Tania :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich October 15, 2022 at 9:15 AM Back With my congrats to you on a top win! Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2022 at 2:25 AM - Thank you, Andrea :) - hugs

Beata Agustin October 15, 2022 at 5:55 AM Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... wisdom-filled in your excellent poetic style. Thanks for your uplifting comments. God bless you. Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2022 at 2:25 AM - Thank you for your comment, Beata :) - hugs

Valsa George October 14, 2022 at 7:26 PM Gleams of true nature cannot help coming out of the fascade of put up appearance, at least once in a while . Great senryu and great image showing the duplicity of human nature. Congratulations Smile on your first place win Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2022 at 2:24 AM - Thank you for your comment, Valsa :) - hugs

Brian Sambourne October 14, 2022 at 10:03 AM Superb! A beguiling Senryu. So thought provoking. Congratulations! Brian Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2022 at 2:24 AM - Thank you for your comment, Brian :) - hugs

John Lawless October 14, 2022 at 6:35 AM The eyes are the window of the soul... Nicely done and thanks for participating in the contest Anne-Lise Andresen October 14, 2022 at 12:00 PM - Many thanks for my 1st place in your contest, John :) -

Andrea Dietrich October 11, 2022 at 3:00 PM so interesting. that this person does not lie. I was trying to recall the theme of John's contest here! Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2022 at 2:24 AM - Thank you for your comment, Andrea :) - hugs

Joseph May October 10, 2022 at 8:23 PM The darkness reflected in the eyes, Very nicely done Anne, hugs Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2022 at 2:23 AM - Thank you for your comment, Joseph :) - hugs

Bill Baker October 9, 2022 at 12:03 AM Intriguing Senryu, Sunshine. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Bill Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2022 at 2:23 AM - Thank you for your comment, Bill :) - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis October 7, 2022 at 3:29 AM A glorious Senryu, my dearest friend, Anne-Lise. So poetic and so witty. Hugsxxx Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2022 at 2:23 AM - Thank you for your comment, Demetrios :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar October 6, 2022 at 11:20 PM I loved this poem. Great sense of humour. Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2022 at 2:23 AM - Thank you for your comment, Victor :) - hugs

Michael Tor October 6, 2022 at 5:55 PM Seeing beyond and reading someone is a special trait you mastered in this Poetry of yours. Well done Anne-Lise... Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2022 at 2:22 AM - Thank you for your comment, Michael :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose October 6, 2022 at 4:18 PM very intense dear friend, sometimes we can see right through the facade, well done, gl in the contest Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2022 at 2:22 AM - Thank you for your comment, Vie Rose :) - hugs