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Manifest

Battling plastic faces veiled behind charcoal framed prisons— I breathe your ardent soul to life in this bland world.

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Silent One

Date: 10/24/2023 12:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Bill Baker
Date: 10/26/2023 5:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your contest success, Fading Star Silence. Well done! Powerful thoughts in your Dodoitsu. I just posed a poem: Where do things come from? It's about manifesting our deepest desires. I hope you'll give it a look. Thanks for following my poetry. A poet friend in Texas, Bill (no Captcha ... couldn't post comment) so did it here, Fading Star Silence. :-(

Nik Canada7

Date: 10/24/2023 12:49:00 PM

i'm proud and happy for you amore, your seep breathtaking words show me your depth in your rare beautiful souland gols heart,my blue rose.You are a paintress with the palette of your seraphic majestic aura painting your sapphire emotion with bright colors and shades of grace and elegance,my Korean princess,creating a,masterpiece of pureness and beauty.You are my poetry in my heart for eternity,mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito sempre amore mio i love you deeply micia.il nostro eterno amore

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/24/2023 6:03:00 AM

I see a piece of art that draws your attention, an escape from boredom. Congratulations!

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/24/2023 10:36:00 AM

Thank you so much for your beautiful words! And def an escape from boredom! Heh! Thank you again, sweet soul!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/24/2023 3:41:00 AM

In a plastic world where we feel prisoned and unable to break free, theres nothing but love that makes us dream and feel alive and free again, you’ve described that so very well here my beautiful soul sis! You amaze me with how seamlessly you express and weave words together in such an eloquent manner! This is so touching and lucky are the ones that are able to breathe love, amidst all the challenges! Thank you for writing such a heartfelt and soulful write! CONGRATULATIONS on winning!

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/24/2023 10:38:00 AM

Ahhh! Thank you so much my beautiful soul sis! I’m truly so honored to be placed and you always get me and my words! You truly capture the essence of my words! Soul language!! I always love your poetic feedback!

Silent One

Date: 10/21/2023 9:51:00 AM

Great choice for this form.. We are what we manifest sometimes... have to be careful of fake faces in this world... interesting arrangement of words.. wouldn't it be great if we could breathe what we want into life..

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/24/2023 10:42:00 AM

Ahhh, thank you so much, my friend! I so appreciate your thoughts, every time! You truly capture the depth of my words. We really are what we manifest and I’m starting to realize that more in depth, and we really do need to be careful of all the fake faces in this world. I def am more reserved in that area. Wow..you really are a poetic soul..the last line of your comment..it def inspires me to want to write using that line—”wouldn’t it be great if we could breathe what we want into life..”

Nik Canada7

Date: 10/19/2023 11:59:00 PM

I love you deeply micia ..mia passione per sempre ..tuo..il nostro eterno amore

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/24/2023 10:42:00 AM

Ti amo, amore mio mio bellissimo marito..per sempre..tua noi Infinito..il nostro Eterno amore <3

Nik Canada7

Date: 10/19/2023 1:56:00 PM

I love this so much amore, your deep intense words show me your deep within your rare beautiful soul and gold,heart blue rose.You are a rare special being and i will always be by your side crossing storm,darkness,adversities to give you serenity and inner peace,ny korean princess.Loving you in the divine light of our souls in one forever and beyond You leave breathless through your depths making me feel empathy in nuclei of my aura,Mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito per sempre amore mio

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/24/2023 10:46:00 AM

Ahhh..I love how you feel my heart and soul..feeding my mind with the beauty of all you see..only you, my beautiful soul..by my side through the light and the dark..sitting with me through it all, our faith in each other..the soul bond we share..blending into each other. I love you so deeply, to the moon and everywhere, my love..ti amo amore mio, mio bellissimo martio..il nostro Eterno amore..per sempre