Manic Melancholia

Manic Melancholia

He flew high as a kite with no ceiling concealing his madness

A hawker plying his trade with all prayers lost preying on reason

Sold out flapping wings and the wind soaring no sores attached

No strings yet a puppet found but not lost scraping skies all in one

He struck the most delirious chords strangled the care of his mind

A hanged man falling a bruising garrotte noosed losing the plot then

The parachute opened on impact buried the mania deep under cover

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Date: 11/17/2017 1:50:00 PM
Kai, you have such an interesting way of using words and making your poetry deep and dark~
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Date: 11/1/2017 6:06:00 AM
"High as a kite", "ceiling concealing", that is beautifully written. As is all of this very relatable poem....
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Date: 10/25/2017 8:21:00 PM
A very sad, deep look inside oneself Kai. Well written with awesome imagery. Your first line is spectacular. Enjoyed!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/26/2017 1:41:00 AM
Thank you so much Susan. I appreciate that. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 10/25/2017 8:36:00 AM
Potent pen!
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Date: 10/26/2017 1:41:00 AM
Thank you. I like that expression 'Potent Pen'.
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