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Manhattan Soup

Years ago when the kids were young A plan of action in my mind began They ran around playing children's games Peace of mine was never the same When the boys dressed up they looked real cute Fighting baddies they were in hot pursuit Many months I put up with this The noise, the screaming, tearing at my bliss Then came the day all hell broke loose No more their father could be a woose Leonardo, Michelangelo were the first to be shelled Raphael and Donatello were next to be felled Once simmered with herbs and beautiful leek hoops Teenage Ninjas, turned into Turtle Soup Many hours of quietness in tranquillity followed Whilst bowls of Manhattan Soup were delightfully swallowed http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/humour-2.php

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Date: 8/16/2010 8:41:00 PM
Congrats on the win, James
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Date: 8/10/2010 9:22:00 PM
hahaha, good way to get rid of that lot!! congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/9/2010 9:16:00 AM
Congratulations James on your win in (Destroyer((Poet's contest "Turtle Soup". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/8/2010 10:01:00 PM
What a delightful poem. I throughly enjoyed it. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/8/2010 12:01:00 PM
Hi James :) We are of the same age so I think we both played with our kid(s) Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles :) My Chistopher had EVERYTHING imprinted with those guys: blanket, bed sheet, curtains costume toys etc. Congratulations on your success and thanks for your comment.
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Date: 8/8/2010 11:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win..Knew it was a win the minute that I read it...Sara
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Date: 8/8/2010 9:38:00 AM
congrats on your win with this cute entry
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Date: 8/8/2010 6:53:00 AM
Congrats James on your super win in P.D.'s turtle contest with this very entertaining write .. enjoy another biggie win and a happy Sunday..with luv..
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Date: 8/8/2010 6:13:00 AM
Really enjoyed this one James and I am back for a second helping of your TMNT soup ;) I knew this would win-- super congrats to you!! ^_^ -- nikko :)
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Date: 8/8/2010 1:19:00 AM
You beat me yet again, I must try harder!!! haha. Big congratulations on your win, even though you did eat your kids to get it. I enjoyed reading it again ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 8/7/2010 11:49:00 PM
Trully loved your poem james congratulations in my turtle contest,..p.d.
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Date: 8/2/2010 12:01:00 PM
Well who can forget those Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles James? brilliant piece for the contest for P.D. .. we still have the videos from when they were early on... my four sons loved them ... my entry is Four Turtles for Soup... about my sons and their own turtles.. good luck.. with luv..
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Date: 8/2/2010 10:01:00 AM
Great write highlander! love Simone
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Date: 8/2/2010 8:02:00 AM
Got a laugh out of this one...Excellent play on the ninjas as metaphoric language...Enjoyed..Very pleased at the diversity of the write.Thanks once again for stopping by, reading and commenting on my work..The continued encouragement is appreciated....Sara
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Date: 8/2/2010 7:58:00 AM
Haha, I just called social services ;) I'd forgotten all about those Teenage Ninja Turtles. Enjoyed your write James, good luck in the contest ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 8/2/2010 7:53:00 AM
oh very nice, Teenage Mutant Ninja Soup-- can I have a bowl of that Manhattan Soup please? Wish you the best in the contest James :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 8/2/2010 7:30:00 AM
cute one . good luck in the contest, and thank you for you always kind comments
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