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Manhattan Soliloquy

...dedicated to Hart Crane (1899-1932)


As I dream the sounds of morning sliver,
cut my senses; slow, persistent slices
pierce my eyes to ragged wakefulness.
The muffled cries of merchant hustle and
the honking of the traffic, the noises of
a summer's day displace my reveries.

I wake, and through my window I see
barges in the harbour, bustling like
beetles, scuttling over busy waters,
dragging ships with overflowing cargoes
safe to rest - the dockhands primed 
and ready to disgorge the merchandise

as sunshine washes monoliths of steel
and glass in dazzling refinement - Manhattan
like a mass of molten gold, smoldering and bold.
Steam and smoke engulf a vibrant scene

encompassing, then drifting into nothingness,
the sky a blazing blue, the docks a maze
of rarified activity as yelling fills the air.

Beams irradiate my garret - drafts of bright 
and humid air like punches in the stomach
take the breath out of my lungs and leave me
gasping. I sit and watch you sleeping on the bed.

You stretch atop the covers like a vision,
your legs and arms a picture in repose;
I do not dare to wake you from your slumbers,
your limbs splayed like a strumpet, you expose

your naked form, my touch will flutter your desire.


Your body 'wrapped in mine,
our souls a living sacrament
to love and joy divine.
We congregate, and all the stars explode,
fulfillment is our quest,
our sacred testament.


As evening gently falls the windows glimmer,
the city glistens now from altered light;
the glowing falters as the sun dips slowly,
dying in the West, makes way for night.

Activity's still rife, but in my garret,
I reach for you as darkness settles soft,
I hold you in my arms, forever blessed,
while stars are quietly dancing up aloft.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/9/2012 7:04:00 AM
I got goose bumps reading this. The city sounds are so alive with sunlight, sounds and vivid sights; then you take us to bed with such eroticism and sensual delicacy. Your poem whirls with emotion and it is a delight to read. P S I suppose this is far enough down the list I could say I love your beard, Wish more of it was showing :)
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Date: 9/7/2011 3:14:00 PM
The lines of verse follow your passion, Keith! Oh, Erato has you in the palm of her hand, and has embedded herself in your glorious heart! A powerfully passionate write! One who keeps her distance from me, is your endearing muse! Love, Mikki
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