Manhattan Manahatta Memories

Upon my asking a lone Lenape
what happened to their tribal home;
so soulful that he barely told me
the tragic tale of how it had gone.

The white man thought he coyly took it
a thing that he cannot ever own.
It's lost and changed, cracked crooked
what will happen next, remains unknown.

Our sense of self, of our longhouse fires
this "hilly island" turned to stone.
On that same old ground stands soaring spiers
where "bow stave" hickories once were grown.

Like low blowing leaves in wisping winds
our spirits spun sorrows through the years.
There are too few left to tout the ends
to soothe away ancient father's fears.

We drew deepest strength from sweet silt soil
the same on which too many people stand.
When we try to reach, dream, climb 'n toil;
then roam high steel in the skies so grand.





Notes: 20 lines rhyme  For centuries before the Dutch renamed Manahatta (Mannahatta) in Lenape language meaning "hilly island", to Manhattan in the 1600s; this land had a rich Native American history. Today it is called New York City. The Lenape natives inhabited this area well before the 1500s. Europeans disadvantaged indigenous peoples as they hastened to turn tribal reservations into personal property for themselves. This is not a proud part of American history.





1/16/21 written

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 5/5/2021 10:27:00 AM
This is very special Greg. I love the way you smoothly integrate words like longhouse, bow stave, tribal home juxtaposed with "soaring spiers," "roam high steel." Artfully done Greg with powerful results! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/5/2021 12:50:00 PM
You're good Sam. Not one outta ten knows what a "bow stave" is. Fact is, this has a narrow audience, so I was pleased to have it place. Thanks so much for you kindness.
Date: 5/4/2021 8:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. I like you added information. Have a blessed day writing away............
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Date: 5/5/2021 12:52:00 PM
Paula, thanks so much for the reading and you are so correct, the notes on this one helped many of the readers, I'm sure.
Date: 5/4/2021 3:07:00 AM
That seemed to be a common thread as Europeans emigrated to the North American continent, “move in and take over.” Today, as we look back, from the native Americans point of view, it was a sad day. Nicely written, Greg, congrats on your placement. John
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Date: 5/3/2021 8:18:00 PM
An edifying piece, Greg, indelible words ... rhyming inclusive, in addition to being didactic -- poignant that its conclusive criterion mimics my Hawaiian heritage (Manhattan/Honolulu, Hawaiian meaning, 'melting pot'), my gratitude for your participation, and my compliments on your well-deserved placement my friend, Aloha!
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Date: 2/9/2021 9:59:00 AM
Beautiful, visceral write. Congrats on the win!
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Greg Gaul
Date: 2/9/2021 12:15:00 PM
Thank you for noticing and commenting on this poem about the travesty against the Lenape. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/31/2021 11:57:00 AM
Awesome piece, Greg! Loved it and would have placed you higher had you included "WDJ" after your poem title.
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Date: 1/31/2021 1:32:00 PM
I was lucky to place at all. Thank you for including my piece. Your comment is most appreciated.
Date: 1/18/2021 11:50:00 PM
"Low blowing leaves in wisping winds" Your way with words is amazing, beautiful. I will visit again.
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Date: 1/19/2021 5:21:00 AM
Barbara, thank you for your kind comments. Forgive me, but I somehow think your are connected to New York, so, if true, my poem may have resonated. Regardless, your visit is most appreciated.
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