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September.17.2023

Pleiades No.5. Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Joseph May

Placed First

Mango, a magic fruit Most delicious in taste My all-time favorite. Meaty yellow when ripe Makes yummy marmalade. Melting smooth in our mouth Mesmerizes fruit fans

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/23/2023 3:27:00 AM

Back with congratulations. SK

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/21/2023 5:15:00 AM

Mmm…delicious pleiades! Congratulations!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/20/2023 8:02:00 AM

Valsa, a huge CONGRATS on your well-deserved win with this vividly descriptive Pleiades. Janice

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/20/2023 6:26:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your win, Valsa, well-deserved with this wonderful Pleiades.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/20/2023 4:11:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the Pleiades 5 Poetry Contest, Valsa :) -

Terry Miller

Date: 9/20/2023 3:05:00 AM

A delicious pleiades

Joseph May

Date: 9/19/2023 5:55:00 PM

It is delicious, Congrats on your win Valsa, Very nicely penned

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/19/2023 2:51:00 PM

so wonderful poem, i could "hear" and taste this delicate fruit, thanks a lot yann

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/19/2023 8:49:00 AM

Incredibly beautiful. A wonderful Pleiades, dear Valsa.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/19/2023 2:47:00 AM

Wow! Brilliant, Valsa, I also wrote on mango, and that "melting" line too - really, I'm reading yours only now, after I finished posting mine...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/18/2023 11:58:00 AM

Creative one that reads like a good contender if for a contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. My husband likes their flavor, but me not so much. Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/17/2023 8:02:00 PM

Me too: Man go(es) for mangoes!

Silent One

Date: 9/17/2023 11:27:00 AM

I think this is the only mango one I have seen, although I may have missed the others... you described the sweet sensation of eating a mango very well..

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/17/2023 10:38:00 AM

Your exquisitely composed poem ignited a craving within me! I savored every word. Mango juice enthralls my senses, yet the fruit itself possesses a subtle tanginess that adds an unexpected twist to its lusciousness.

The Situation

Date: 9/17/2023 6:24:00 AM

It's advertisment.

Deb M

Date: 9/17/2023 6:14:00 AM

I just love Mangoes Valsa such a beautiful fruit….your poem made me want one! Enjoyed….Debx