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September.17.2023
Pleiades No.5. Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Joseph May
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Mango

Mango, a magic fruit Most delicious in taste My all-time favorite. Meaty yellow when ripe Makes yummy marmalade. Melting smooth in our mouth Mesmerizes fruit fans
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Kendrick Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 3:27 AM
Back with congratulations. SK
Rodrigues Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 5:15 AM
Mmm…delicious pleiades! Congratulations!
Canerdy Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 8:02 AM
Valsa, a huge CONGRATS on your well-deserved win with this vividly descriptive Pleiades. Janice
Poet Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 6:26 AM
Back with congratulations on your win, Valsa, well-deserved with this wonderful Pleiades.
Andresen Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 4:11 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the Pleiades 5 Poetry Contest, Valsa :) -
Miller Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 3:05 AM
A delicious pleiades
May Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 5:55 PM
It is delicious, Congrats on your win Valsa, Very nicely penned
Rolland Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 2:51 PM
so wonderful poem, i could "hear" and taste this delicate fruit, thanks a lot yann
Buhagiar Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 8:49 AM
Incredibly beautiful. A wonderful Pleiades, dear Valsa.
Daniel Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 2:47 AM
Wow! Brilliant, Valsa, I also wrote on mango, and that "melting" line too - really, I'm reading yours only now, after I finished posting mine...
Kendrick Avatar
September 18, 2023 at 11:58 AM
Creative one that reads like a good contender if for a contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. My husband likes their flavor, but me not so much. Sara
Wolf Avatar
September 17, 2023 at 8:02 PM
Me too: Man go(es) for mangoes!
One Avatar
September 17, 2023 at 11:27 AM
I think this is the only mango one I have seen, although I may have missed the others... you described the sweet sensation of eating a mango very well..
Poet Avatar
September 17, 2023 at 10:38 AM
Your exquisitely composed poem ignited a craving within me! I savored every word. Mango juice enthralls my senses, yet the fruit itself possesses a subtle tanginess that adds an unexpected twist to its lusciousness.
Situation Avatar
September 17, 2023 at 6:24 AM
It's advertisment.
M  Avatar
September 17, 2023 at 6:14 AM
I just love Mangoes Valsa such a beautiful fruit….your poem made me want one! Enjoyed….Debx
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