Manger Shadow

Manger Shadow

A shadow lurks behind the manger bed
 Swaddled by indifference,
  Creeping behind
 Lowing cows 
And 
Bleating sheep,
Power without power raising up a hoary head
 While in vanity dim shades attempt to weave
  A gloomy thread into the scent
   	 Of frankincense
		And
         Myrrh;
Endeavoring to cover ears of prophecy,
 Encouraging ignorance
  With busyness in crowded streets
     Of travelers taxed,
	Bowed down with burdens;
No Gloria’s heaven sent
As shadows pass in front of starlight
	On highways straight
	 Deserts wild
	  Mountains leveled
And star-struck strangers
	 Asking only for directions;
Where flowers,
	Blooming in the wilderness,
Lay trampled
 Beneath pilgrim’s feet;
Trying to drown out 
	Amen
		And
	In Excelsis Deo
Shouted out in triumph
	To wide eyes
		Keeping watch
			Beneath olive trees
Rather
 Longing to smother a baby’s breath
     With a snarl,	
Rejoicing only in the anticipated silence;
To leave no room at the inn
	For goodwill
		Or
	Shalom Eternal
Yet cower in a nightmare’s chaos,
	Breath held in,
For a kingdom lost by victory 
	Already claimed;
Futility, the unwelcomed guest,
 Birthing fury
  That pounds upon the chest of truth,
	Stalking the Word protected
          By holiness,
Claiming dice unfairly loaded
 To howl
	In rage
As justice and as peace now kiss –
As swords and spears
	Rise up
		As plows and pruning hooks
To tend the vineyard of the King
 Then sing out the great glad tidings
   On a mountaintop
Where people walk out of darkness
 Into light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gist Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 12:18 PM
Good work here!
Kauffman Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 11:50 PM
Thank you for your compliment. This poem was a wonderful way to bring back to me the true meaning of Christmas even with the shadows at work then and now!
Makama Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 11:15 AM
Delicious lines, your imagery and creativity are royal sisters. Nice reading from the pen of your mind. Happy 2020.
Kauffman Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 1:32 PM
Your message is poetry. Thank you for your feedback! I look forward to staying in touch!
Mweetwa Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 10:20 PM
Beautifully penned and congratulations!
Buck Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 1:10 PM
Sam: For me this offered every emotion. The cold dark shadow on the back of my neck to the warm "son" on my face. Thank you for sharing this with all of us on the soup. oldbuck
Kauffman Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 1:34 PM
Hi there, Thank you! I wanted this piece to be a reflection of the hope that the "Son" brings to all of us.
Horsman Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 12:18 AM
Amazing poetry, As a child my Christmas was the light, when to receive a gift, was with ones hard earned pittance, and to thank Jesus, with carols of joy was the norm. Maturity turned that around and yes your poem speaks volumes,,can relate to this so much...Happy New Year.
Kauffman Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 11:34 PM
Thank you Harry. Happy New Year. I am so appreciative of your perspective and your shared memories.
La France Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 8:50 AM
Sam, wow, this is a stunning poem, I was tangled up in each word, each line, this is a FAV for me !
Kauffman Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 11:32 PM
Thank you so much for your message. I loved writing about the promise of Christmas with the theme of the contest - seemed to bring everything into perspective.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 23, 2019 at 9:58 AM
You are welcome and the piece is deserving of the honour. Blessings for Christmas.
Kitchin Avatar
December 23, 2019 at 4:28 AM
Congratulations Sam on your winning placement with your well penned powerful poem!
Adams Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 8:23 PM
Congratulations on your win with this one... :) hugs
Kauffman Avatar
December 23, 2019 at 2:20 AM
Thank you Sandra. Christmas hugs to you.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 7:18 PM
Great poetry, very close to a medal. Thanks for entering my contest.
Kauffman Avatar
December 23, 2019 at 2:19 AM
Hi Richard! Thank you for the Christmas gift and this theme that allowed me to honor Christmas in a very unique way. Merry Christmas to you and to all a good night! Thank you for the placement.
Adams Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 7:51 PM
powerful penning Sam...vivid enough to see the scenes, just enough emotions to feel it... well done! :)
Kauffman Avatar
December 21, 2019 at 11:12 AM
Hi Sandra, Thank you for your feedback! The theme of the darker side of Christmas just would not let me go. While Christmas is a celebration there is a force that works to destroy it not wanting to admit it has lost the battle.
Krutsinger Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 7:40 AM
That ending line was masterfully done, as was the entire poem!
Kauffman Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 10:21 AM
Thank you Caren. With all of the dark images in the poem I wanted an ending that would jolt the poem into the true meaning of Christmas - darkness has lost but the Light will always win. I so appreciate your feedback.
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