Manatee 'Neath Bridge

manatee 'neath bridge

endangered species rebounds --

sighting evokes joy




*Entry for Carol Brown's Nature Haiku contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Horne Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 9:12 AM
I've been meaning to read this one for ages - glad I finally did. Lovely piece, Carolyn : )
Foulk Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 11:56 AM
A great Haiku, enjoyed reading. thank you for taking time to read The Red Water Pump and for your comment.
Fraser Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 3:16 PM
I agree with Robert. It's a travesty that a day out on the water is more important than what lies beneath. Good luck in Carol's contest Carolyn on this lovely Haiku about an awesome animal....:) smiles
Pettit Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 8:52 PM
I hope they are making a comeback. Too many of them have suffered fatal injuries from boat propellers.
Poet Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 5:14 AM
Congrats Carolyn on your 1st place win with this Haiku about endangered species---kashinath
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 8:35 PM
Ah, a cute animal one. So glad I got to see it finally! Congratulation on your big win, CArolyn. I heard about those animals in Florida!
Roberts Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 8:14 PM
lovely haiku , I've never seen a manatee, congrats on your win in the contest
Peranteau Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 5:21 PM
I recall episodes of the manatee on the history channel...their scars and plight...how sad... and for you to bring them back to life; in mine eyes dear poet...how greatful I am ! Great write my friend ! Congratulations to you ! much love, james
Mehta Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 12:57 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Carol, Carolyn
Ruebel Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 10:19 AM
Hello Carolyn, Beautiful, simply beautiful. Congratulations on your win As Always, Shar
Freeman Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 9:59 AM
Great idea, Carolyn. Congratulations on your poem's first place honor of recognition. Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 8:32 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Mannan Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 7:00 AM
An animal lover for sure.Many congratulations for this win.
Mac Donald Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 6:13 AM
Lucky you to have seen the Manatee, Carolyn! I saw one once near a camping zone in Florida, and yes it "evokes joy".:) A beautiful thought, to write a Haiku for this splendid creature. Good luck in the contest! Love, Mikki
Brown Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 6:06 AM
Congratulations on your very deserving win in my contest Carolyn. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol
Docherty Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 10:21 PM
~A perfect haiku moment captured, how lovely to catch sight of a rarer creature and share in natures abundance. Good luck in the contest - good to hear from you...xx
Tate Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 4:37 PM
Carolyn, you have such diversity in your poetic prowess. Loved it. Thanks for your comments on Granfather's Clock poem. I heard the song when a child some 70 years ago, but of course I re-engineered the circumstances to make it my own.
Kendrick Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 3:31 PM
Good that another one of God's creatures has a chance to live...Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by and commenting...Sara
Neels Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 12:41 PM
This is quite a beauty Carolyn and it must be pure joy to see one of them with your own eyes.. Good luck with this gem and thank you for the chat today, love Wilma
Onclaud Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 9:20 AM
a relevant reminder to treasure the environ with evocative lines...knock-out piece, carols! winning cheers to you! :) huggs, nette
Barrow Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 7:42 AM
interesting and well thought
Knop Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 6:14 AM
Manatees are a really endangered species. They are also existing in the waters of Papua New Guinea. Best of luck in Carol's contest and have a great week!...Love, Gert
Loving Iii Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 2:53 AM
mamatee's are like dogs and cats in a sence that you cant eat'em. john
Konos Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 4:39 PM
WOW....Girl....really good...Many thanks
Mehta Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 2:10 PM
I think Manatee is a rare animal with rounded tail I have once seen in Florida in 1998. Caroly. How are you? I hope you are fine.
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