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Man On a Train

there's a man on a train with his head in his hands I'm three seats behind a man on the train with my head in my hands

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Date: 11/19/2023 12:15:00 AM
This is very interesting! Very enjoyable playing with words and concepts
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/19/2023 1:09:00 AM
I wrote this poem in the depths of depression quite a number of years ago, I absolutely love this one and it's always been one of my favourites, don't ask me to explain it though it's a poem that just is, I'm sure I knew at the time haha, thanks so much for picking this poem to read

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