Man of Ages

The girls crowded the pavement, three abreast
all tapping at their phones, going to class,
one saw me, pushed her friend across the chest,
'get out the way, and let the old man past'.
Old man? I looked around, did they mean me?
Is that who I've become, how I'm perceived?
Age sixty-one, grey hair, that's what they see
am I older than inside I believe?
For in my mind, sometimes I can be twelve,
or sixteen, giddy from first love's kiss,
mid forties, and then happy in myself,
not thinking of a future such as this.
They say that name tags are just sticks and stones,
no consolation for old, weary bones.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Inman Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 10:24 PM
I feel you, Viv.
Gauthier Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 10:08 PM
Expertly penned, Viv. A wonderful poem. Most endearing.
Shaw Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 9:20 AM
The older I get the younger my mind feels, but: the body not able to skip around the girls with ease, that's me . . . : )
Andresen Avatar
February 13, 2020 at 2:15 PM
- Age doesn't mean much after all ... it's just a number ... men with gray hair ... are 6-y :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Laurie Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 8:42 PM
G'day Viv … yep; in our race of life, the brain leaves the body further and further behind - thank you Viv - Lindsay
Michael Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 1:37 AM
Good one...I'll be walking those steps soon...and I can see the difference of all...
Wigley Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 1:59 AM
As long as you can still keep walking, Arturo, you'll be fine. Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Cunningham Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 1:34 AM
Keep your mind young Viv, don't worry about the other bits. Tom
Wigley Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 1:58 AM
Thanks, Tom, I'm doing my best with my mind, but some of my other bits look like they need ironing :) Regards, Viv
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