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Man Moves On

Perpetually
stars intermingle
with the universe
creation deathless
like the wide blue sea.

Cosmic order
continuous
in harmony
alone with God

The prophet
predicts man
in ‘Star ships’

invades
God’s own

Help!

© Harry J Horsman  2010

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Skat A

September 20, 2010 at 1:16 PM

YOUR POETRY IS VERY AMUSING HARRY, ENJOYED*luv~SKAT

Carolyn Devonshire

September 16, 2010 at 2:30 PM

Wow! This is excellent, Harry! I like the idea of exploring "cosmic order" in star ships, but it's sad to think we are invaders -- hopefully just curious pioneers. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

September 16, 2010 at 12:28 AM

VEry interesting one, Harry!! I am seeing many like that in this great contest!!

September 15, 2010 at 8:03 AM

Wow this captures the essense (if it has an essense) of the entire universe. I enjoyed reading and best wishes in the contest. Love Scarlett

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 14, 2010 at 5:14 PM

Awesome piece Harry.. luv that title ..its great.. and the words are stupendous my friend.. appreciate your very warm and most welcome comments tonight on my writes...enjoyed and good luck with luv..

Katherine Stella

September 14, 2010 at 4:59 PM

hey kiddo think on first word might be missing a letter for syllable count I tried it 3 times and I come up with 4 lol but thats just me and doesnt take away the crafty write here this should do very well in contest also thanks for all the kind comments to my works I will be back soon to give ya more reviews I am running behind so please bear with me thanks again