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Man Moves On

Perpetually stars intermingle with the universe creation deathless like the wide blue sea. Cosmic order continuous in harmony alone with God The prophet predicts man in ‘Star ships’ invades God’s own Help! © Harry J Horsman 2010

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Skat A

Date: 9/20/2010 1:16:00 PM

YOUR POETRY IS VERY AMUSING HARRY, ENJOYED*luv~SKAT

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/16/2010 2:30:00 PM

Wow! This is excellent, Harry! I like the idea of exploring "cosmic order" in star ships, but it's sad to think we are invaders -- hopefully just curious pioneers. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2010 12:28:00 AM

VEry interesting one, Harry!! I am seeing many like that in this great contest!!

Date: 9/15/2010 8:03:00 AM

Wow this captures the essense (if it has an essense) of the entire universe. I enjoyed reading and best wishes in the contest. Love Scarlett

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/14/2010 5:14:00 PM

Awesome piece Harry.. luv that title ..its great.. and the words are stupendous my friend.. appreciate your very warm and most welcome comments tonight on my writes...enjoyed and good luck with luv..

Katherine Stella

Date: 9/14/2010 4:59:00 PM

hey kiddo think on first word might be missing a letter for syllable count I tried it 3 times and I come up with 4 lol but thats just me and doesnt take away the crafty write here this should do very well in contest also thanks for all the kind comments to my works I will be back soon to give ya more reviews I am running behind so please bear with me thanks again

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/14/2010 5:26:00 AM

different take on the universe poem, enjoyed reading today! You have a great imagination!

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/14/2010 2:29:00 AM

Harry what an interesting write, I love your first two lines, "perpetually stars intermingle" If for the contest, all the best to you.. :) Wilma