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Man Moves On

Perpetually
stars intermingle
with the universe
creation deathless
like the wide blue sea.

Cosmic order
continuous
in harmony
alone with God

The prophet
predicts man
in ‘Star ships’

invades
God’s own

Help!

© Harry J Horsman  2010

Copyright © Harry Horsman | Year Posted 2010

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Skat A Date: 9/20/2010 1:16:00 PM YOUR POETRY IS VERY AMUSING HARRY, ENJOYED*luv~SKAT Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/16/2010 2:30:00 PM Wow! This is excellent, Harry! I like the idea of exploring "cosmic order" in star ships, but it's sad to think we are invaders -- hopefully just curious pioneers. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/16/2010 12:28:00 AM VEry interesting one, Harry!! I am seeing many like that in this great contest!! Login to Reply

Date: 9/15/2010 8:03:00 AM Wow this captures the essense (if it has an essense) of the entire universe. I enjoyed reading and best wishes in the contest. Love Scarlett Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/14/2010 5:14:00 PM Awesome piece Harry.. luv that title ..its great.. and the words are stupendous my friend.. appreciate your very warm and most welcome comments tonight on my writes...enjoyed and good luck with luv.. Login to Reply

Katherine Stella Date: 9/14/2010 4:59:00 PM hey kiddo think on first word might be missing a letter for syllable count I tried it 3 times and I come up with 4 lol but thats just me and doesnt take away the crafty write here this should do very well in contest also thanks for all the kind comments to my works I will be back soon to give ya more reviews I am running behind so please bear with me thanks again Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 9/14/2010 5:26:00 AM different take on the universe poem, enjoyed reading today! You have a great imagination! Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 9/14/2010 2:29:00 AM Harry what an interesting write, I love your first two lines, "perpetually stars intermingle" If for the contest, all the best to you.. :) Wilma Login to Reply