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Man Is More Than Flesh and Blood

All men will…
Will leave a legacy
After life’s journey comes to an end                        
This is something to think about 
In these times of uncertainties
We weave intrinsically, our “eternity” 
Man is more than flesh and blood
Our spirit never dies
Daily, we choose

Whether consciously or not
Moment by moment
A word uttered can not die
Cannot become void
But rides a wind into forever
Awaiting accountability
Man is more than flesh and blood
Our spirit never dies
Daily, we choose

Copyright © Audrey Haick | Year Posted 2010

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Kevin Semeniuk Date: 9/20/2010 6:03:00 PM this is really good!..niice work! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/13/2010 10:33:00 PM These two lines showed much wisdom: But rides a wind into forever Awaiting accountability Good writing. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 9/13/2010 9:22:00 PM enjoyed this poem, so much feeling here. Harry Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 9/13/2010 12:18:00 PM Spirits never die, they live forever. Lovely verse Audrey >> James Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 9/12/2010 6:10:00 PM Smile ~ "Thank You for 'Your Wonderful Hearts Lovely Portrait' Amid These Beautiful Words Dear" &, I shall search them again as I add "This Treasure" to my faves ~ "Much Love & Warmth 'Always & Forever' to You & Your Loves," John! ~ Smile, "Have The Most Blessed & Beautiful of Evenings, 'Lovely Audrey Carey' &, May It Be As Beautifully Bright, As 'Your Beautiful Soul;'" Bye Beautiful Lady!:) ~ Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 9/12/2010 6:01:00 PM Smile ~ I am extremely regretful that I have not been around "These Bejeweled Walls Here At Soup" much as of late dear lady but, I believe I am going to be changing all of that as of now and also, I do owe "Your Beauty" an apology I do believe for, changing a poem that "Your Brightness" had so kindly commed upon; "Please" forgive myself for that error dear; for "You Are Truly Precious Unto My Humble Soul!!!" ~ ....Cont:) Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 9/12/2010 5:53:00 PM Smile ~ "Absolutely Dear, 'Great Words of Wisdom,' Beyond The Slightest of Doubts to Be Noted;' Although, 'Mercies Rivers of Rejuvinating Waters,' Extend Far & Wide!!!" ~ Smile, "Hello Beautiful, Blessed & Lovely Audrey Carey!!!" ~ I hope that life has been treating "Your Gracefulness" so very beautifully dear &, I have missed "Your Precious & Tender Heart & Soul;" which as this diamond here I Always seem to find, "Amid 'Your Beautiful & Sparkling Verse'" ~ ....Cont:) Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/12/2010 5:44:00 PM You have brought about a difference between men and other beings, Audrey Login to Reply

Kevin Semeniuk Date: 9/12/2010 5:09:00 PM awesome!.."a word uttered can not die"...such a great line! Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/12/2010 3:12:00 PM The legacy you leave, my dear, will be one of love, joy and hope. I'm so glad to see you conveying spiritual values in this powerful poem, Dimples. You are a spiritual mentor to many, much like John Freeman is. And you take the time so graciously to help each person who needs assistance. Thanks so much for sharing this uplifting poem! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Chuck Keys Date: 9/12/2010 2:54:00 PM this was beautiful ... this will be added to my fav.s .. came at the right time, one of my friends just passed away and this kind of captures some of my confused feelings of life and death .. and i will pass this on to his wife, if you dont mind. thank you, chuck Login to Reply