Man In the Moon

make a wish. the man in the moon
will grant three wishes, mom said. . .
my toes curling in wet grass
catching fireflies in the dark hedge
eyes dancing in the starlight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ackerson Avatar
May 7, 2015 at 8:05 PM
I like the connection of fireflies and eyes, add on top of that "dark hedge." Nicely done.
Allison Avatar
May 7, 2015 at 2:46 PM
Beautifully penned Thomas I especially love the imagery of the final two lines:-) Hugs Jan xx
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