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Man From Wun

There once was a man from Evely Wan Wun Who walked around with what look like his son Women would stroke the boys head Shaking with delight he said “It’s not me son, but keep stroking I’m having fun ** For my Good Friend Deborah Guzzi **

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/21/2011 9:53:00 AM
Hey, you should do the stuff Deb here is telling you. With just a bit of meter adjusting, this limerick and a few of your other wildly funny ones could be "perfecto!" Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:52:00 AM
oh , boy, now that one creates quite the strange picture, dressing it up like a baby!
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Date: 1/15/2011 4:49:00 PM
Pump up line 1 you have only 7 syllables and 9 in line 2 (describe the man..a firm man, a fine man, a randy man) line 3 drop "would" LOL [no wood jokes!]/women stroked the boys head[6]/ until the old man said[6]line 5 needs [9] syllables....awwwww I love my dedication!
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Date: 1/15/2011 2:52:00 PM
Quite humorous with good images . Good luck in the contest, Sidney
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