Man and Universe

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MAN AND UNIVERSE

FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, PICTURE TAKEN BY ME! (c)

Man Reason's Firstborn child, Ruler of earth God's ambassador For to apply HIS will: Of peace and of harmony So as swift cooperation And unimpeded coexistence Is established under divinity's Attentive eyes that safeguard creation. Unfortunately, it seems that Man Has overstepped the limits set By the universal law Of mutual respect And holy justice Creating thus Unwanted Chaos Now! (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 01 August 2016 Double Etheree: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/1/2016 7:34:00 AM

- Yes, really chaos - Better no one can say it ..... great written my friend a 7 + ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/1/2016 7:42:00 AM

Thank you so much dearest Anne-Lise for taking the time to visit and making such a wonderful comment!

Probir Gupta

Date: 8/1/2016 4:28:00 AM

Very nice and meaningful Etheree ... Pleased ... But sans flower ... disappointed ! ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/1/2016 5:19:00 AM

I am sorry my friend, Probir, I always post flowers later! Thank you so much for your delightful visit. Now the flowers are here! haha!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/1/2016 3:44:00 AM

Excellent. Very true and well said. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks fro sharing it.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/1/2016 8:07:00 AM

So nice to see again my friend, Ravi! Thank you for visiting!