Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Etheree

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MAN AND UNIVERSE

FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, PICTURE TAKEN BY ME! (c)

Man and Universe

Man
                                              Reason's
                                           Firstborn child,
                                            Ruler of earth
                                         God's ambassador
                                        For to apply HIS will:
                                    Of peace and of harmony
                                     So as swift cooperation 
                                  And unimpeded coexistence
                                  Is established under divinity's
                              Attentive eyes that safeguard creation.
                                  Unfortunately, it seems that Man 
                                    Has overstepped the limits set
                                          By the universal law
                                            Of mutual respect
                                              And holy justice  
                                                Creating thus
                                                   Unwanted
                                                      Chaos
                                                        Now!








(c) Demetrios Trifiatis
      01 August 2016




Double Etheree:
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.

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Anne-Lise Andresen August 1, 2016 at 7:34 AM - Yes, really chaos - Better no one can say it ..... great written my friend a 7 + ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Demetrios Trifiatis August 1, 2016 at 7:42 AM Thank you so much dearest Anne-Lise for taking the time to visit and making such a wonderful comment!

Probir Gupta August 1, 2016 at 4:28 AM Very nice and meaningful Etheree ... Pleased ... But sans flower ... disappointed ! ... Demetrios Trifiatis August 1, 2016 at 5:19 AM I am sorry my friend, Probir, I always post flowers later! Thank you so much for your delightful visit. Now the flowers are here! haha!

Ravi Sathasivam August 1, 2016 at 3:44 AM Excellent. Very true and well said. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks fro sharing it. Demetrios Trifiatis August 1, 2016 at 8:07 AM So nice to see again my friend, Ravi! Thank you for visiting!