Man and Universe

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Demetrios Trifiatis.


MAN AND UNIVERSE

FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, PICTURE TAKEN BY ME! (c)

Man
                                              Reason's
                                           Firstborn child,
                                            Ruler of earth
                                         God's ambassador
                                        For to apply HIS will:
                                    Of peace and of harmony
                                     So as swift cooperation 
                                  And unimpeded coexistence
                                  Is established under divinity's
                              Attentive eyes that safeguard creation.
                                  Unfortunately, it seems that Man 
                                    Has overstepped the limits set
                                          By the universal law
                                            Of mutual respect
                                              And holy justice  
                                                Creating thus
                                                   Unwanted
                                                      Chaos
                                                        Now!








(c) Demetrios Trifiatis
      01 August 2016




Double Etheree:
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/1/2016 7:34:00 AM
- Yes, really chaos - Better no one can say it ..... great written my friend a 7 + ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Trifiatis Avatar
Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/1/2016 7:42:00 AM
Thank you so much dearest Anne-Lise for taking the time to visit and making such a wonderful comment!
Date: 8/1/2016 4:28:00 AM
Very nice and meaningful Etheree ... Pleased ... But sans flower ... disappointed ! ...
Login to Reply
Trifiatis Avatar
Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/1/2016 5:19:00 AM
I am sorry my friend, Probir, I always post flowers later! Thank you so much for your delightful visit. Now the flowers are here! haha!
Date: 8/1/2016 3:44:00 AM
Excellent. Very true and well said. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks fro sharing it.
Login to Reply
Trifiatis Avatar
Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/1/2016 8:07:00 AM
So nice to see again my friend, Ravi! Thank you for visiting!
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter