Danesh Morgan Poet Limerick

Man a Pause Limerick

Women Man a pause what's 
that a clause ?

When man is better in any 
cause,

No sons and fathers,

Nor all the brothers,

Will we never ever man a 
pause!

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Mustapha Mohammed August 28, 2013 at 6:28 PM Interesting piece Danesh. I like this one because it had me thinking. Danesh Morgan August 28, 2013 at 6:44 PM true M.M but we men get mid life crisis. . . some adjust to it better than most that impact is less on me due to my child like behaviour or i could have been deep in depression by now. thanks

Ken Carroll August 28, 2013 at 5:54 PM Hey Danesh buddy, Short but clever write... Ken Danesh Morgan August 28, 2013 at 5:57 PM HI KEN, SORRY DON'T KNOW HOW PD MESSAGE WENT TO YOU. THANKS FOR THE COMMENT Danesh Morgan August 28, 2013 at 5:55 PM PD you've changed my name! well i really don't know anything coz my mum keeps everything about ladies things to herself. . just that men gets mid life crisis and older women menopause. . . thank you

Poet Destroyer A August 28, 2013 at 5:27 PM Hi Danehs, this is interesting... I haven't hit the stage yet... nor do i want to... good luck in the contest... Linda Danesh Morgan August 28, 2013 at 5:56 PM the message above is for you. lol

Sara Kendrick August 28, 2013 at 4:00 AM Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Sara Danesh Morgan August 28, 2013 at 5:58 PM thank you Sara