Mama

Mama The one who wipes your nose and rinses you off with a hose. She picks you up and you drop your cup. You make a mess and she ruined her new dress. Your toys are left out but she never pouts. The crying never stops until you suddenly saw rain drops. Dad comes home to save the day and mom wants to hit the hay. Your first word was candy because you couldn’t say Andy. Nothing beats mamas love yet she’s as calm as a dove.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/4/2015 11:24:00 PM

Hi Morgan, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 5/31/2015 7:48:00 AM

Morgan, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"

Viv Wigley

Date: 5/30/2015 12:13:00 AM

Thanks for making me smile, Morgan. A great first submission. Welcome to Poetry Soup, with it's merry band of wordsmiths. I'm sure you'll have a great time here, so keep on penning your prose and setting it free for us all to enjoy. Regards, Viv