Mallaise

Four young men and quite large
Are cruising the mall like a barge.
But I, diddle, diddle,
Fit as a fiddle, 
Aim my cane at the middle and charge!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 10:45 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! You have given an added dimension to the saying "Raising Cane!" Keep the laughs coming, I say. :) gw
Mccann Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 12:46 AM
Good one! I hadn't thought of that one! Liz
Mccann Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 5:30 PM
Thanks again, Linda Alice! Elizabeth
Fowler Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 5:47 AM
Too cute Elizabeth! Linda
Duncan Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 6:03 PM
Limericks are fun :-)
Sambourne Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 6:48 AM
Funny + clever. I am partial to the forward charge of seniors. Best wishes, Brian
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June 4, 2022 at 6:24 AM
What a laugh, love your Limerick Elizabeth… Belle
Dietrich Avatar
May 16, 2022 at 10:38 AM
oh that is so cute. Good one, Elizabeth
Mccann Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 9:03 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I value your opinion.
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