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Mall Brawl

Persons should be shopping at this mall. This is not a place for anyone to have a brawl. I see teenagers engaging in a big fight. To have these types of altercations is not right. The holiday shopping period is now past. Let's not have these donnybrooks occur and last. Adults and children must attend this mall in peace. Have all unnecessary physical disputes immediately cease.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/10/2017 11:11:00 AM
You take a tragic moment in time and construct a story around it that leaves the reader rendering applause. Emile.
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Date: 12/29/2016 3:22:00 AM
I couldn't agree more, Robert. I'm glad you wrote about this to highlight this sad situation. Hope all is well with you personally. Hugs
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Date: 12/28/2016 2:57:00 PM
oh how sad a scene for anyone to witness Robert:-( Hugs Jan xx
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