Malcolm seemed nice

Young Malcolm was meek, rarely riled,
asking for korma, quite mild,
they all thought him nice,
until ordering rice,
that was where Malcolm went wild.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kendrick Avatar
May 8, 2024 at 4:26 AM
I am now wondering if the wild means he was excited about getting rice which was one of his favorite foods or if he went wild in a way that said that is the worst food and I am not going to eat it. LOL..Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Greenhough Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 6:29 AM
A cute limerick. Rice is an odd favorite. Most people go wild for chocolate.
Challender Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 9:16 AM
Thank you :)
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