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Making Waves

The ocean is struggling every day against the shore that holds it back, Foaming, frothing, Crashing waves, This fight will go on forever, for God has bound the sea. 3rd March 2023 Syllables checked with www.howmanysyllables.com For Emile Pinet's "Waltz wave" contest

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/3/2023 6:32:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... serenely delighting! God bless you.

Akanksha Ayantika

Date: 4/2/2023 10:37:00 AM

Congratulations Joanna for your win! Love your waves

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/1/2023 4:43:00 PM

Congratulations Joanna. Very wise poem:)

Ryan Gayagay

Date: 4/1/2023 4:15:00 PM

I can definitely smell the ocean while reading your poem, and hear the waves as they race to shore. Congratulations on your win, dear friend.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/1/2023 10:54:00 AM

I love this take on the ocean waves Jo. Congratulations on your win! :)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/1/2023 10:49:00 AM

The continuous struggle between land and sea is well projected here, Joanna. Congratulations on your merited win. Regards // paul

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/1/2023 10:21:00 AM

Congratulations Linda! Your enchanting poem "Making Waves", has easily earned you a distinguished place in my “wave" poetry contest. Well done my friend, Emile.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/5/2023 1:52:00 PM

Wow. A powerful poem and I cam see it :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2023 3:59:00 AM

- Yes, this made waves ... great written, Jo :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/3/2023 6:30:00 AM

Good morning Jo. Short , powerful and to the point. My favorite kind of poem. Have a great weekend, young lady:)

Di11y Da11y

Date: 3/3/2023 5:14:00 AM

Gosh! A powerful one about a concept I'd not thought about before. I found this really interesting and it looks a sure fire winner for the contest.

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/3/2023 4:40:00 AM

Holds in the basin of His Great heart. Rocks the sea with endless current. Like the bible, borders are to keep us focused rightly in the His Loving Fold. Excellent write to ponder. Well done!