Joanna Daniel Poet Verse

Making Waves

The
ocean
is
struggling
every day
against
the 
shore that 
holds it back, 
Foaming, frothing, 
Crashing waves, 
This fight
will
go on
forever, 
for God
has 
bound the
sea. 


3rd March 2023

Syllables checked with www.howmanysyllables.com

For Emile Pinet's "Waltz wave" contest

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Beata Agustin April 3, 2023 at 6:32 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... serenely delighting! God bless you.

Akanksha Ayantika April 2, 2023 at 10:37 AM Congratulations Joanna for your win! Love your waves

Daniel Turner April 1, 2023 at 4:43 PM Congratulations Joanna. Very wise poem:)

Ryan Gayagay April 1, 2023 at 4:15 PM I can definitely smell the ocean while reading your poem, and hear the waves as they race to shore. Congratulations on your win, dear friend.

Linda Alice Fowler April 1, 2023 at 10:54 AM I love this take on the ocean waves Jo. Congratulations on your win! :)

Paul Callus April 1, 2023 at 10:49 AM The continuous struggle between land and sea is well projected here, Joanna. Congratulations on your merited win. Regards // paul

Emile Pinet April 1, 2023 at 10:21 AM Congratulations Linda! Your enchanting poem "Making Waves", has easily earned you a distinguished place in my “wave" poetry contest. Well done my friend, Emile.

Heidi Sands March 5, 2023 at 1:52 PM Wow. A powerful poem and I cam see it :)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2023 at 3:59 AM - Yes, this made waves ... great written, Jo :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Daniel Turner March 3, 2023 at 6:30 AM Good morning Jo. Short , powerful and to the point. My favorite kind of poem. Have a great weekend, young lady:)

Joseph P. DiMino March 3, 2023 at 4:40 AM Holds in the basin of His Great heart. Rocks the sea with endless current. Like the bible, borders are to keep us focused rightly in the His Loving Fold. Excellent write to ponder. Well done!