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Making Snow Angels In the Snow

Free from the frigid grip of winter's blow we enter a time of hay fevers and colds Though April showers help the flowers grow they can be unkind, to creaky bones of old The frosty cheeks of children everywhere are pinned against a dirty window pane The pristine snow of white has lost its glare replaced by icky puddles and wet terrain Spring, ...its not all about roses and shine there are days when it rains and pours all day She weaves herself around winter's entwine and often leaves the earth too damp for play I rather be making snow angels in the snow then waiting and watching, for flowers to grow Feb 24, 2023 Sponsor Michelle Faulkner Contest Name Spring Is Not All

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 3/6/2023 7:41:00 PM

That is an especially beautiful angel above. I've lived in Vt & on the Canadien border so I 'know snow' Snowflakes all different are facinating aren't they? I could relate to your poem and I really enjoyed it, and yes, I would rather make angels in the snow then wait for flowers to grow in the wet days of early spring. Such pretty pictures your poem paints.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/3/2023 6:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/picture. Snow angels sound like fun. I have never made them. Have a great/blessed day......................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/3/2023 3:04:00 AM

"Spring, ...its not all about roses and shine there are days when it rains and pours all day" it's a fact. Beautifully written on the other aspect of the season. Congratulations!

Frederic Parker

Date: 2/25/2023 2:42:00 PM

You have painted the true picture of Spring, well done...goodluck

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/25/2023 2:00:00 AM

Brilliant poem. Would never have snow angels in Malta. The worst we can get is a rare fog.

Yann Rolland

Date: 2/24/2023 7:36:00 PM

lovely poem, with fair considerations about spring, this is relevant and so "cute", loved it yann

Charles Messina

Date: 2/24/2023 2:00:00 PM

Lovely write, Vie. Love making snow angels, but I must say, it's been a long time since I played in the snow (lol) Best for a win! Good Luck in the contest. Hugs Charlie

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/24/2023 5:51:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by Charles, I was born in Motnreal, so I tend to love the winters, we are used to it lol

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/24/2023 12:06:00 PM

- You are right ... spring is not all sunshine ... but seeds and buds must have some rain ... snow angels are fun ... but cold to lie down in the snow ... a lovely poem, Vie Rose - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/24/2023 5:51:00 PM

Thank you dear Sunshine, may your heart always feel warm no matter what the season , :)