Mystic Rose Rose Poet Sonnet

Making Snow Angels In the Snow

Free from the frigid grip of winter's blow  
we enter a time of hay fevers and colds
Though April showers help the flowers grow  
they can be unkind, to creaky bones of old 

The frosty cheeks of children everywhere 
are pinned against a dirty window pane 
The pristine snow of white has lost its glare 
replaced by icky puddles and wet terrain 

Spring, ...its not all about roses and shine
there are days when it rains and pours all day 
She weaves herself around winter's entwine 
and often leaves the earth too damp for play 

I rather be making snow angels in the snow
then waiting and watching, for flowers to grow 

Feb 24, 2023
Sponsor	Michelle Faulkner
Contest Name	Spring Is Not All

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Marikate Kingston March 6, 2023 at 7:41 PM That is an especially beautiful angel above. I've lived in Vt & on the Canadien border so I 'know snow' Snowflakes all different are facinating aren't they? I could relate to your poem and I really enjoyed it, and yes, I would rather make angels in the snow then wait for flowers to grow in the wet days of early spring. Such pretty pictures your poem paints.

Paula Goldsmith March 3, 2023 at 6:06 AM Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/picture. Snow angels sound like fun. I have never made them. Have a great/blessed day......................

Christuraj Alex March 3, 2023 at 3:04 AM "Spring, ...its not all about roses and shine there are days when it rains and pours all day" it's a fact. Beautifully written on the other aspect of the season. Congratulations!

Frederic Parker February 25, 2023 at 2:42 PM You have painted the true picture of Spring, well done...goodluck

Victor Buhagiar February 25, 2023 at 2:00 AM Brilliant poem. Would never have snow angels in Malta. The worst we can get is a rare fog.

Yann Rolland February 24, 2023 at 7:36 PM lovely poem, with fair considerations about spring, this is relevant and so "cute", loved it yann

Charles Messina February 24, 2023 at 2:00 PM Lovely write, Vie. Love making snow angels, but I must say, it's been a long time since I played in the snow (lol) Best for a win! Good Luck in the contest. Hugs Charlie Mystic Rose Rose February 24, 2023 at 5:51 PM Thanks for stopping by Charles, I was born in Motnreal, so I tend to love the winters, we are used to it lol

Anne-Lise Andresen February 24, 2023 at 12:06 PM - You are right ... spring is not all sunshine ... but seeds and buds must have some rain ... snow angels are fun ... but cold to lie down in the snow ... a lovely poem, Vie Rose - GL in the contest :) - hugs Mystic Rose Rose February 24, 2023 at 5:51 PM Thank you dear Sunshine, may your heart always feel warm no matter what the season , :)