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Making Shovels Scrape

When shovels scrape
and make screeches 
like fingernail grates 
on blackboards,
you know the job
is almost done.
As shovels designed to scoop,
when flipped over and made to rake,
shriek their embarrassment.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gorelick Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 5:25 PM
This is surely a winner, clever ending. BG
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 4:15 PM
AHHH! Awesome! I wasn't sure where you were going with this one, which set it up se well! A winner for me! :))) Good luck! xomo
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