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Making Plans

Plans are like pudding So soft and sweet; We shape them and make them Like chocolate chip treats. Rolling them ‘round In our smarty-pants minds Believing in somedays, Goals and deadlines. We treat them like candy Or precious lodestones; And can’t live without them So deep in our bones. How could we manage To move on ahead? Without future thinking We’re dumber than lead. So sooner or later With enough sweat and tears; We’ll reach all our goals and vanquish our fears. Until then we struggle, Strive, lose and win, Never planning tomorrow Might not come again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/16/2011 8:10:00 PM
Hi Terry, I could read this a hundred times and never tire of it, like a song can be addictive, so is this and you have soup mail.
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Date: 9/16/2011 6:20:00 AM
Thought provoking! and a very very very sweet poem.
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Date: 9/15/2011 9:16:00 PM
Terry, you have soup mail.
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Date: 9/15/2011 8:40:00 PM
this flows so beautifully and has some lovely imagery. i love the opening line. nice write!
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Date: 9/15/2011 5:52:00 PM
Your unique use of words and the way this is put together makes it a delight to read. I can't think of any part of it that isn't precious!
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