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Making Peace

I meander down a path sublime
Running fingers through sands of time
I come to seek the universal truth
While reminiscing upon my youth




Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~CLOUDS MEANDER~ 2020

AP: Honorable Mention 2021

Submitted on September 16, 2019 for contest ARBITRIUM DIVISA 4  sponsored by GREGORY R BARDEN  -  EXCERPT from my poem ZEN GARDEN 

and December 8, 2019 for contest WRITING CHALLENGE - RANKED 2ND

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Juliet Ligon Date: 12/19/2019 7:40:00 PM Nice little musing! Congrats! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 12/19/2019 9:49:00 PM Thanks, Juliet. Much appreciated.

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 12/18/2019 5:59:00 AM Thank you so much for your participation in my contest, Line - congratulations on your win! Please forgive the lengthy wait for results. I hope you and yours have a joyous and bountiful holiday season - blessings, my friend! :o) <3 Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 12/18/2019 7:59:00 AM Thank you so much, Gregory. Life happens then we appreciate even more when life finally does slow down. I trust all your endeavors were fruitful.

Timothy Mcguire Date: 9/18/2019 5:01:00 PM Love the rhythm and rhyme A FAv for me Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 9/18/2019 8:21:00 PM Thanks for the lovely visit and compliment, Timothy.

Sandra Adams Date: 9/17/2019 8:35:00 PM love the thought of running fingers through the sand's of time...good choice for the contest :) hugs Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 9/17/2019 10:02:00 PM Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated.

Lindsay Laurie Date: 9/17/2019 8:12:00 PM Hello Line … when time permits, reminiscing on our youth brings on gentle smiles or wincing frowns, but it's from our own experiences - thanks Line - Lindsay Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 9/17/2019 10:02:00 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Lindsay.

Chris Green Date: 9/17/2019 1:56:00 PM This was fantastic my friend. It should do very well in the contest. Best wishes Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 9/17/2019 10:02:00 PM Thank you so much, Chris. Most appreciated.

Regina Mcintosh Date: 9/17/2019 10:07:00 AM I love this... Wish you the best in the contest :) Blessings Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 9/17/2019 10:03:00 PM Thanks, Regina. Most appreciated.

Gershon Wolf Date: 9/16/2019 9:51:00 PM This contest is beyond me, but I can tell you that I feel that the poem you've penned is profound --- yet still sweet and sweeter. Excellent! Best wishes, Gershon Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 9/16/2019 10:42:00 PM Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated.