Making Peace

I meander down a path sublime
Running fingers through sands of time
I come to seek the universal truth
While reminiscing upon my youth




Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~CLOUDS MEANDER~ 2020

AP: Honorable Mention 2025, Honorable Mention 2021

Submitted on December 8, 2019 for contest ARBITRIUM DIVISA 4 sponsored by GREGORY RICHARD BARDEN - RANKED 2ND
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ligon Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 7:40 PM
Nice little musing! Congrats!
Gauthier Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 9:49 PM
Thanks, Juliet. Much appreciated.
Barden Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 5:59 AM
Thank you so much for your participation in my contest, Line - congratulations on your win! Please forgive the lengthy wait for results. I hope you and yours have a joyous and bountiful holiday season - blessings, my friend! :o) <3
Gauthier Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 7:59 AM
Thank you so much, Gregory. Life happens then we appreciate even more when life finally does slow down. I trust all your endeavors were fruitful.
Mcguire Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 5:01 PM
Love the rhythm and rhyme A FAv for me
Gauthier Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 8:21 PM
Thanks for the lovely visit and compliment, Timothy.
Adams Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 8:35 PM
love the thought of running fingers through the sand's of time...good choice for the contest :) hugs
Gauthier Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 10:02 PM
Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated.
Laurie Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 8:12 PM
Hello Line … when time permits, reminiscing on our youth brings on gentle smiles or wincing frowns, but it's from our own experiences - thanks Line - Lindsay
Gauthier Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 10:02 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Lindsay.
Green Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 1:56 PM
This was fantastic my friend. It should do very well in the contest. Best wishes
Gauthier Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 10:02 PM
Thank you so much, Chris. Most appreciated.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 10:07 AM
I love this... Wish you the best in the contest :) Blessings
Gauthier Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 10:03 PM
Thanks, Regina. Most appreciated.
Wolf Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 9:51 PM
This contest is beyond me, but I can tell you that I feel that the poem you've penned is profound --- yet still sweet and sweeter. Excellent! Best wishes, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 10:42 PM
Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated.
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