Making My Mark

I've been exploring here
For almost three years now
Unlocking all it's secrets
Is something that I've vowed

The natives I've discovered
Are giants tall and strong
So I'm careful what I touch
For fear I might do something wrong

I really have to say 
They always treat me right
They bring me food and drink
And make sure I'm safe at night

I have tried to learn their language 
And I admit it drivers me Cuckoo
When they stare at me wide eyed
While chanting "Gaga Goo goo"

While being very patient
I try to gain their trust
But several time a day I fear
I feel I'm gonna bust

So, I climb the Temple steps
To the chamber at the top
Then I crawl up to the throne
And it's there I have to stop

With the giants on both sides
They seat me on the throne
I feel a bit unstable
So, they don't leave me alone

Now sitting here it comes to me
There was one thing left to do
To leave my mark and name this place
The land of Caca Poopoo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 10/2/2019 9:48:00 AM
This brought a smile and a chuckle.
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Date: 5/13/2019 9:16:00 AM
I would love to hear the back story on this one. Very entertaining Jerry. These are fun times, enjoy them!
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Date: 5/11/2019 6:52:00 PM
ha ha ha very witty Jerry your poem has definitely made its mark with me and made me smile:-) Incidentally I never used baby talk with my son and despite my silly sense of humour and poop poetry he has grown up into a lovely young man:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/13/2019 9:18:00 AM
Jan, it is only right that you chimed in on this one!
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