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Making My Mark

I've been exploring here For almost three years now Unlocking all it's secrets Is something that I've vowed The natives I've discovered Are giants tall and strong So I'm careful what I touch For fear I might do something wrong I really have to say They always treat me right They bring me food and drink And make sure I'm safe at night I have tried to learn their language And I admit it drivers me Cuckoo When they stare at me wide eyed While chanting "Gaga Goo goo" While being very patient I try to gain their trust But several time a day I fear I feel I'm gonna bust So, I climb the Temple steps To the chamber at the top Then I crawl up to the throne And it's there I have to stop With the giants on both sides They seat me on the throne I feel a bit unstable So, they don't leave me alone Now sitting here it comes to me There was one thing left to do To leave my mark and name this place The land of Caca Poopoo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/2/2019 9:48:00 AM
This brought a smile and a chuckle.
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Date: 5/13/2019 9:16:00 AM
I would love to hear the back story on this one. Very entertaining Jerry. These are fun times, enjoy them!
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Date: 5/11/2019 6:52:00 PM
ha ha ha very witty Jerry your poem has definitely made its mark with me and made me smile:-) Incidentally I never used baby talk with my son and despite my silly sense of humour and poop poetry he has grown up into a lovely young man:-) hugs Jan xx
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Dean Wood
Date: 5/13/2019 9:18:00 AM
Jan, it is only right that you chimed in on this one!

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