Paloma P Poet Romanticism

Making Love To Beethoven

There was poetry in their lovemaking,
the way he brushed her hair aside
 as he gazed piercingly into her eyes,
she welcomed his tender caresses
   as well as his demanding fervor,
he cherished her sensually inclined
  free spirit pleasing his every whim,
the rhythmic concerto between 
 them whispered Moonlight Sonata
   & climaxing crescendos' finale 
amid Beethoven's 5th symphony
  of harmonious little deaths further
      intimate refrains' melodic dalliance

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Ovidiu Bocsa December 4, 2016 at 7:21 AM Embrace the inner music. With Beethoven in veins, and Mozart in ears, I magically recall the strange Passacaglia of Webern to finally as a child jumping and hopping and hoping while singing: I feel pretty, oh so pretty. I feel pretty and witty and bright...I feel charming...

Paul Callus November 24, 2016 at 9:18 AM A cleverly, musically and sensually executed poem, Paloma. Most enjoyable, to say the least! Regards // paul

Just James November 22, 2016 at 12:16 PM Your writing is like a flower in the wind no rhyme or rules can hold you down...lovely! Paloma P November 22, 2016 at 12:22 PM My mama said I never followed rules! Thanks JJ. :)

Probir Gupta November 17, 2016 at 10:37 AM Sensually beautiful ... Beethoven association is lovely ... Paloma P November 22, 2016 at 12:22 PM Thanks Probir.

Daniel Turner November 16, 2016 at 2:40 PM Barry White and his love orchestra doesn't play Beethoven. The poem is down right sexy, Paloma. Paloma P November 16, 2016 at 2:42 PM Barry is savored on Friday nights. :) Merci Danny.

Charmaine Chircop November 16, 2016 at 2:06 PM Sensual and beautiful Paloma..Beethoven's music nice pick..to accompany throughout :) Paloma P November 16, 2016 at 2:10 PM One of my favorites, thanks Charmaine. :)

Mike Hauser November 16, 2016 at 2:03 PM Beautiful! Paloma P November 16, 2016 at 2:09 PM Thanks Mike!

Chris Green November 16, 2016 at 1:38 PM When I saw the title my first thought was, why do you want to make love to that old dude...he's dead, isn't he? :) Lets talk steamy concerto #9...holly moly, now it is I who needs a shower and a pair of waterproof headphones. This was cool and hot at the same time Paloma. Paloma P November 16, 2016 at 1:47 PM HA you're a funny guy. Whatever blows your mind Chris, yep # 9 is pretty on cue too, piano or violin? :)