Making Love To Beethoven

There was poetry in their lovemaking,
the way he brushed her hair aside
 as he gazed piercingly into her eyes,
she welcomed his tender caresses
   as well as his demanding fervor,
he cherished her sensually inclined
  free spirit pleasing his every whim,
the rhythmic concerto between 
 them whispered Moonlight Sonata
   & climaxing crescendos' finale 
amid Beethoven's 5th symphony
  of harmonious little deaths further
      intimate refrains' melodic dalliance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/4/2016 7:21:00 AM
Embrace the inner music. With Beethoven in veins, and Mozart in ears, I magically recall the strange Passacaglia of Webern to finally as a child jumping and hopping and hoping while singing: I feel pretty, oh so pretty. I feel pretty and witty and bright...I feel charming...
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Date: 11/24/2016 9:18:00 AM
A cleverly, musically and sensually executed poem, Paloma. Most enjoyable, to say the least! Regards // paul
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Date: 11/22/2016 12:16:00 PM
Your writing is like a flower in the wind no rhyme or rules can hold you down...lovely!
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Paloma P
Date: 11/22/2016 12:22:00 PM
My mama said I never followed rules! Thanks JJ. :)
Date: 11/17/2016 10:37:00 AM
Sensually beautiful ... Beethoven association is lovely ...
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Paloma P
Date: 11/22/2016 12:22:00 PM
Thanks Probir.
Date: 11/16/2016 2:40:00 PM
Barry White and his love orchestra doesn't play Beethoven. The poem is down right sexy, Paloma.
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Paloma P
Date: 11/16/2016 2:42:00 PM
Barry is savored on Friday nights. :) Merci Danny.
Date: 11/16/2016 2:06:00 PM
Sensual and beautiful Paloma..Beethoven's music nice pick..to accompany throughout :)
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Paloma P
Date: 11/16/2016 2:10:00 PM
One of my favorites, thanks Charmaine. :)
Date: 11/16/2016 2:03:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Paloma P
Date: 11/16/2016 2:09:00 PM
Thanks Mike!
Date: 11/16/2016 1:38:00 PM
When I saw the title my first thought was, why do you want to make love to that old dude...he's dead, isn't he? :) Lets talk steamy concerto #9...holly moly, now it is I who needs a shower and a pair of waterproof headphones. This was cool and hot at the same time Paloma.
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Paloma P
Date: 11/16/2016 1:47:00 PM
HA you're a funny guy. Whatever blows your mind Chris, yep # 9 is pretty on cue too, piano or violin? :)
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