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Making Love In the Rain

Sometimes I wonder Do you think of me? I lie So silently Tears streaming down slow Never Have I loved As strongly as now I always forget I'm better at hiding than I realise I expect people to see right through me, I'm terrified of what they'll think I'm especially terrified of you. You should be able to read me like a book When you don't, I'm amazed When I told you, you looked like I'd slapped you My world It has changed I was in your arms Briefly We melted Lying in the rain Your head On my chest Isn't a burden I want you to wrap your arms around me I want to feel your scruff on my cheek I want to run my fingers through your hair I want to make love in the rain. You are the scariest thing that's happened We should be lying next to each other We should be sharing our art Your song My book and My philosophy We should Leave this place Find a safe venue I would Follow you Privileged Presence

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/26/2012 5:47:00 PM
I really like this!!! Deep words...soft tone! Welcome to PS!!!!
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Date: 6/26/2012 1:47:00 PM
Welcome to the soup. I enjoyed this love poem. Be who you are and you'll be loved for it! Thank you for sharing.....Tanya
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Date: 6/26/2012 7:40:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Rachael. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2012 11:43:00 PM
a unique and heart touching love poem .avoiding cliche usages ,you can keep a freshness through out the poem .brilliant work .thank you for sharing .jk
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