Making Love In the Park
Was recalling us making love in the park
We should have waited at least until dark
A couple of people then a crowd did appear
Watching and giggling and giving a cheer
On the love making scale, we won top spot
We'd gone too far, we just couldn't stop
It's as if they were watching a sporting event
Till whammo, we lay panting and spent
They filed away as if after a game
Talking bout how we showed them no shame
Truth of the matter, we weren't aware
A crowd of onlookers had gathered and stared
Involved in an amazing moment of bliss
We carried on not a beat did we miss
A lesson we learned from that day in the park
Next time we'll surely wait until dark
© Jack Ellison 2015
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