Making Love

Drinking water all night,
jerking off on the Sabbath,
and feeling the night making me feel alive,
Sabrine she left me a year ago-
a lie or two broke me apart;
giving too much of love,
giving her my heart and knowing that she'd lose it,
and I sit in the dark room
with one window open,
listening to the people next door making love,
and the bed frame slamming against the wall,
thinking "Holy Moly brother, give her a break, she'll break on you!"
but then remembering my next door neighbors were lesbians.

Then I remember Sabrine again,
letting lose with other men,
while she still is trying to get into college,
she was a good girl and a nice friend,
one you wish you could ask for,
wanting to make love with her,
but she is with another guy-
living in California,
but sometimes I think she turned lesbian
and is swinging with other women on Skid Row,
feeling up each other's shirts and skirts- it makes me hard-
see I still think of her, but now in a different light.

.2.23.2014.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Davis Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 12:15 AM
Chris Such intense and descriptive writing. I was shocked at some of the lines you created. You made my heart jump at times. Your a bad bad boy. LOL Thanks for the awesome comment on my Jitters poem. Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 9:06 AM
This is powerful Chris. Outstanding and raw in it's descriptiveness.
Smith Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 7:23 PM
Knock on the door next door and see if you can borrow a cup of milk
Pettit Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 2:12 PM
A lot of vivid descriptiveness! Sabrine is just another woman. There are plenty of others out there.
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