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Making Lights Minichu

A cage of sweet burning fire gold Hung on night's swinging shears— A golden flame still a twin so In Orion's wordless mouth, Its romance by dark christened By rain; she's been cut out Glisten Chills in Glimpses A cage of sweet burning fire gold, Its romance by dark christened, Glimpses ~Ethereal Lanterns~

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2024 12:57:00 PM

So pretty, and congrats for your win.

Ink Empress

Date: 4/8/2024 4:57:00 AM

Dear sweet paige, you have a very deep and individualistic way of expressing adn weaving words, that makes you stand out for me, as you always make me think deep, i love your diction and flow of words and how youv delivered it for the prompt! Thank you for sharing and for supporting my contest. Im grateful, congratulations on your win. Sending you light

Mat Ignacio

Date: 3/27/2024 10:17:00 AM

the language, the word choice, a pleasure to read

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/26/2024 2:41:00 PM

Love those first two lines, Paige! Thank you for your visits to my page!

Silent One

Date: 3/26/2024 5:56:00 AM

Nicely done Paige..

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/25/2024 6:09:00 PM

Dear Paige, your poem is a mesmerizing dance of imagery and emotion. The juxtaposition of fire and darkness, of romance and mystery, creates a vivid tapestry of sensations. I love how each line is like a brushstroke painting a picture of ethereal beauty. It's a captivating piece that lingers in the mind long after reading. Well done! - Blessings, Daniel