Making It Twogether

Deep solace lingers on between the pauses
of your lisping words--- a quest for normalcy
amidst the yells never heard by moonless eves,
by  cathartic drawls  never felt by anyone
except me... holding those mottled palms
I watch the light flickering among
veiled shadows from your eyes...I cry inside.

Though inner peace can be anonymous, 
distant from life's torment, I sing our
childhood tunes where despair lays heavy
on needled days:Somehow, it calms
your thoughts, then we grin, laugh if
only for an instance...until winds of an
ailing mind snuff time's flow, while the blood
of tears carries us to space we do not know.
Yet,  faith prevails like a whistling serenade
which calls you back to a dream of comfort.
Although this ailment reaches stage 3, we 
feel reborn by so many dreams of life's ventures
yet to be done-- the journeys to mountain tops,
the different flavor of late autumnal rain ,
a newborn's tiny  frame cradled by your arms...
( remember you wanted two?)

Dearest friend, oh Eena of all seasons, I align
my white energy with you, bold and unyielding--
twogether are are never far off: watch me smile,
allow me to listen, and relish this affirmation:
' Dreams are to be lived. Live! You are never alone.'



Contest of Silent One: Together we are strong 
3/21/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/30/2018 7:37:00 PM
Congrats on your win here, sweetie and I love how you put TWO into the title!
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Date: 3/27/2018 5:02:00 PM
Awesome write , congratulations on your win, Nette..your poetry is always so enjoyable to read .. Have a nice Easter weekend :) Hugs eve
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Date: 3/25/2018 5:05:00 AM
Eena, the renewer and twogetherness in all seasons. Congratulations on your win, Kai
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Date: 3/24/2018 11:16:00 PM
Well done, nette. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/24/2018 8:25:00 PM
Congratulations on this thought-provoking well-written piece!
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Date: 3/23/2018 12:53:00 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your well deserved first place win.
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Date: 3/23/2018 12:50:00 AM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your 1st place win.It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/22/2018 3:56:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/22/2018 3:37:00 PM
So many wonderful lines, this poem is so deep, like all your poems Nette.... Congratulation on your first place, we should all be there for one another, so we can all be strong..
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Date: 3/21/2018 11:13:00 AM
Forceful poetry of encouragement and deep friendship!
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Date: 3/21/2018 10:39:00 AM
Impeccable--hitting a sensitive chord in my heart!
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Date: 3/20/2018 6:35:00 PM
This one touched me it reminded me of my mother who died with Alzheimer's 10 years ago
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Date: 3/20/2018 6:07:00 PM
A lovely poem. Friendships are a true blessing and to be treasured. I am Trying to garner support for MauriceYvonne. He put a poem showcasing a web series he is working on. If you get a chance check it out :). Thanks!
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Date: 3/20/2018 2:57:00 PM
- True, let your friendship be strong forever - GL in the contest, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/20/2018 2:32:00 PM
Delicate tribute to friendship and memories..making it through life together..well written, nette..best for a win.
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