Making It Great In 2008 (Part20): Dumbing Down Or Doing It Up

it's September and the new school year is now off the ground
but there's this crazy phenomenon happening called dumbing down
basically our children have decided that it's not very cool
if you're seen as being someone who's very smart in school
they're getting grades on the level of just barely passing through
for if you look too smart the others will make fun of you
but what the generation of today fails to see
is that education is the key to greater opportunity

when I think of the struggle my ancestors had in order to get educated
to be given a chance to one day become economically elevated
then I look around the word and have come to realize
that children in third world nations see education as a great prize
dumbing down is the latest form of mental slavery today
sabotaging our children's success and stopping their equal pay
to follow the status quo just to appear cool
dumbing down their assets to act like simple fools
no marketable skills and no chance to succeed
emulating those artists who rap about money, violence and greed
how will they ever compete in this global economy
when they don't even possess a basic college degree?

dumbing down their assets instead of doing them up
walking around wondering why they now have empty cups
they need to use that gift from God which is their smarts
and get that education which in life will give them a head start
and whatever they go on to do in their lives be it in either word or in deed
pray that they do it in Jesus' name and plant a mighty seed
don't let the world discourage them and attempt to keep them down
elevate them in Jesus' name and plant them on higher ground

they run around with their pants hanging off their butts and doo-rags on their heads
looking like street gang executioners and not Wall Street executives instead
as parents we've got to do our best to make sure they get educated
as parents we've got to pray for them and make sure in the Word they're elevated
so pray for them, cry over them and help them to do their best
encourage them and let them know they can be better than all the rest
the children are our future, our hope and our legacy
so make sure as parents that they get every opportunity
making it great in 2008 by telling your kids to do it up and not dumb down
just make sure you do it in Jesus' name and with love abound
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 10/2/2008 8:10:00 PM
This is a very interesting piece. I have never heard of dumbing down before. This is just devastating. They should be smarting up with Jesus at their side as their mediator and advocate. I like the flow of this poem and the message. Great job and God bless always! ~Joseph
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Date: 9/26/2008 8:04:00 PM
Louise this just amazingly profound from beginning to end - Thankfully that hasn't happened to my daughter but thanks for the heads up I will sure do some preventive maintenance on that just in case it does come our way - God Bless
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Date: 9/26/2008 11:37:00 AM
a great message thanks for sharing since all of my kids are grown i'm out of touch.
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