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Making Hay While the Sun Shines

she’s a wildflower that makes the honey bee buzz they become as one when penetration so deep threshing machine approaches. © Harry J Horsman 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/14/2020 3:25:00 PM
That last line killed me! Ooh! Great work...you had us and trapped us with your web of words, Harry!
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Date: 4/21/2019 1:50:00 PM
A Buzzing relationship between bee and machine - well penned Harry - hope you are well, haven't seen a poem of yours for a while. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 12/1/2018 8:13:00 AM
A union so perfect that even approaching death does not sway it. A beautiful tanka, Harry. Best wishes. Deb
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Date: 11/27/2018 8:38:00 AM
Oh! Poor Honey Bee...nicely done
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Date: 11/27/2018 3:55:00 AM
Oh the birds and the bees and the flowers and the trees. And there is always some kind of machine to wreck everything. Nice job Harry. Enjoyed it immensely. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/26/2018 8:47:00 PM
What an interesting little poem! lol
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Date: 11/26/2018 3:06:00 PM
Oh, so clever, Harry! And it took me more than one reading to appreciate its wisdom fully. Excellent writing, my friend.
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Date: 11/25/2018 11:44:00 PM
A little bit of sass and a lot of good reading!
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Date: 11/25/2018 8:05:00 PM
HA ha not sure whether to laugh or cry, very clever and amusing.
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Date: 11/25/2018 6:19:00 PM
oh dang, that machine coming along to ruin things!! Cute title for it, Harry.
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Date: 11/25/2018 5:27:00 PM
Very nicely rendered Harry..
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Date: 11/25/2018 5:21:00 PM
Sweetly tantalizing, Harry!
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Date: 11/25/2018 1:53:00 PM
Their relationship goes way back..cleverly written, Harry.
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Date: 11/25/2018 1:04:00 PM
Nice, I like it...I would even laser the first three line on the sky...All the best harry
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