Making Friends

You meet and shake hands
Things seem fine, real grand

You're married; so are they
You all work for your pay
He's a dentist; she's in social work
Professionals, not lowly clerks  

Then you notice their kids. They're strange, a bit weird
One wakes up after noon; another has a full beard
Of course, your first two divorced; they take after you
The next two -- idiosyncratic: Are you that way too?

When you visit their home, their kids are all raging
Yelling and screaming, constantly upstaging
Their parents, who'd once seemed so engaging

And when they return the favor, your oldest just sits
He stares into space, picks at buttons and zits
As the other texts like mad, anything to 
Avoid talking to friends of Mom and Dad 

You view them as parents now, and what do you see?  
A pair of losers whose kids run wild and free
And when they look at you, they see something similar too 
A couple of failures whose kids drive them cuckoo 

It's time to go; you smile and shake hands once again
Half-heartedly agree to another date, but when?
Who has time these days? "We'll get back to you."
As you silently stew: How'd it all come unglued?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/7/2018 3:08:00 AM
The truth comes out- LOL! Wonderful poem, very cleverly done!
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Date: 9/7/2018 4:14:00 PM
Appreciate your visit and your comment, Rhona! ~ Gershon
Date: 9/5/2018 7:47:00 AM
Lol! Full ~ belly ~ roll ~ lol. (it's funny cuz it's true)
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Date: 9/5/2018 12:45:00 PM
Thank you for saving me with your appreciation for this one. I felt that there must be a few people out there who can relate to the experience described. Then again, maybe only one or two. So welcome to our exclusive club ('For members only' -- LOL!) :) gw
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