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Explosion, burning fireballs sail aloft; Meteor begins descent; God’s paint glob hits canvas.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/6/2017 6:29:00 AM
Delightful brevity!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/8/2017 7:46:00 AM
Thank you again.
Date: 7/30/2017 4:43:00 PM
Wow!! Enjoyed this creative work..Sara
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/5/2017 9:35:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sara; I enjoy your work, too.
Date: 7/27/2017 10:34:00 AM
dazzling with word-colors...what a lovely read, ML.. huggs
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/28/2017 2:21:00 AM
Your comments are much appreciated; thanks.
Date: 7/27/2017 7:24:00 AM
Action packed kimo! Very nice!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/28/2017 2:22:00 AM
Many thanks,Kim.
Date: 7/23/2017 9:13:00 AM
A bare canvas,then transform into a beautiful creation in God's hands. Always. But it is terrifying to think of a meteorite coming straight for us... ~*
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/23/2017 3:58:00 PM
Hopefully not us; it will hit somewhere...eventually; I hope where it hits is uninhabited. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 7/23/2017 6:59:00 AM
What an explosion of colors on God's infinite canvas! Marvelous dear ML Kiser!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/23/2017 3:58:00 PM
Why thank you, Demetrios. Your comments are always appreciated and so is your own poetry.
Date: 7/22/2017 9:10:00 AM
ML, Yes -- God is for sure the master paint Globber here!! Love your imagery as always!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/22/2017 10:33:00 AM
Thank you Gary, I am glad that you are enjoying these.

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