Making a Wish

letting go of fear
dandelion seeds flicker
into the sunset
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 5:47 PM
you are so good at these. And it's not often I see a well deserved POTD. Congratulations.
Ashley Avatar
April 12, 2019 at 6:26 PM
Oh, how I just love everything about your haiku, P.M. The title, the emotion and the imagery combine for a gem of a poem. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Allison Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 7:00 PM
what a lovely haiku congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 6:11 PM
A lovely haiku! Congratulations on having it honored with POTD! : )
Duet Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 4:56 PM
What a lovely haiku! I like the metaphor too. Congrats on receiving POTD . Well-deserved. :D
Doll Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 4:34 PM
Such a brilliant haiku, P.M.. Deserving of POTD. Congratulations! Warmest Wishes~ Warren
Gorelick Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 9:55 AM
Congrats on your POTD. Nicely done! BG
Wanter Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 9:50 AM
Love the metaphor in a haiku! Congratulations!
Marc Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 8:37 AM
I feel deeply honored. Such a nice surprise :)
Roper Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 8:31 AM
Congratulations on Poem of the Day, a well written Haiku, P.M..
Marc Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 8:51 AM
Thanks Eve
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 7:14 AM
I love your way with words :) Congratulations on POTD! Wonderful haiku. xomo
Marc Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 8:50 AM
Your support is an inspiration :)
May Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 7:06 AM
Congrats on POTD..
Marc Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 8:49 AM
Thank you Joseph
Warrior Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 6:43 AM
Your wish came true...Congrats!! on your great haiku...and honors for POTD!! P.M., happy endings...^WW^...{*J*}
Marc Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 8:48 AM
Fun post Winged Warrior ~ joyful endings ;)
Smith Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 6:38 AM
Terrific haiku P.M., congratulations for POTD honors...
Marc Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 8:42 AM
'Even a blind squirrel finds a nut once in a while' ~ thanks Charlie ;)
Kitchin Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 4:56 AM
Nice one, congratulations on POTD!
Marc Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 8:41 AM
Thank you Tania
Cunningham Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 2:08 AM
Letting go of fear is sometimes the hard part but once done you feel elated. Congratulations on POTD. Tom
Marc Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 8:41 AM
Agreed ~ thanks Tom
Kiser Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 7:59 PM
I can see them flying off into that sunset; another "fav".
Marc Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 9:35 PM
Because you know where to look. Thanks again M.L.! You made my day :)
Cholt Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 6:39 PM
Great Haiku.
Marc Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 8:33 PM
Thank you W.A.!
Sands Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 4:26 PM
Love it! Very nice :) A favorite
Marc Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 6:39 PM
Thanks Heidi ~ I’m happy you liked it. Your comments are sincerely appreciated :)
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