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Sometimes, whenever I make a wish, I wish I could read your mind, To listen to what you think about me, But I’m afraid of what I’d find, Could I handle the truth, the honesty, The thoughts kept hidden inside, Could I handle your secret opinion of me, The thoughts you keep trying to hide? So I change my wish, I change my hope, To something that we can do, I wish for both of us to do fun stuff, Fun stuff for just me and you, Sometimes whenever I make a wish, I change the wish in my head, I change it from revealing my insecurity, To just doing fun stuff instead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/21/2018 3:40:00 PM
Love the way you think about things and then translate them into lovely rhymes! Another great write Lewis my friend :)
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Date: 2/21/2018 9:00:00 PM
Thank you Judy, i'm glad you enjoy the simple way i think :)
Date: 2/19/2018 2:55:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your honest thoughts, Lewis. Maybe you could opt for a selective wish, ignoring the bad and reading just the good! Regards // paul
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Date: 2/21/2018 9:00:00 PM
i think we all ignore the bad and look for the best often, thanks Paul :)
Date: 2/19/2018 12:39:00 PM
Hmmm, avoiding knowing truth by having fun. I like how you wrote on a unique topic here . You made it light but the seriousness is in the background!
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Date: 2/21/2018 8:59:00 PM
thanks Andrea, i like writing in this light way but covering some deeper topics. thanks for ur thoughts
Date: 2/18/2018 9:49:00 PM
Sweet :)
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Date: 2/18/2018 10:03:00 PM
thanks Maureen
Date: 2/18/2018 7:58:00 PM
Too cute. What an adorable little poem. Totally delightful. Hats off to you, Lewis.
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Date: 2/18/2018 8:03:00 PM
Thank you LIne, i'm glad u liked this one :)

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