Makes No Sense

I believe in God.
I'm glad that I'm not bald.
A dollar's a hundred cents,
This poem makes no sense.
I hope you're not appalled.
I love the zoo.
Where's Timbuktu?
Billy's my name.
Wanna play a game?
A baby is brand new.
I have a phone.
Granny's not at home.
Can you build a bomb?
You're talking all wrong.
I'm glad that I'm not grown.
Your hair is so soft.
My bed is in a loft.
My bear's name is Ted.
I sleep in a bed.
Say hi to Microsoft.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Weeks Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 1:23 PM
I meant to ask why everyone likes this poem so much out of my others. I know why I like it; it was fun to write. I need more feedback so I can know how to make future poems that lots of people will like. Thanks for all your comments and keep posting comments on my poetry.
Weeks Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 7:43 AM
What's likable about this poem? It was fun writing it.
Anglesey Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 10:32 AM
Very original and witty. Love the whimsical childlike quality.
Weeks Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 2:02 PM
Thanks. It was fun writing it.
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